"I'll drive".
"No, I'll drive said Sid.
They argued until Bob snatched the keys.
Sid's fist caught Bob in the eye.
"What's going on here?" demanded the Police Sergeant.
"I want to drive the new van" said Bob.
"That's ridiculous" said the Sergeant
"Two police officers fighting over who gets to drive the new van!"
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40 comments:
ROFLMAO!!! I didn't even see this coming. How wonderful. I can't stop laughing at this...You are an amazing writer my friend. Have a wonderful Friday :)
Too funny. In 55 words you were able to make me LOL as I sit here this AM reading my favorite blogs! Great writing ! Thanks for helping me start my day with a smile. : )
Arresting story!
Actually, many cops are hotheads and it wouldn't surprise me at all!
lol. maybe someone should give them a ticket. fun 55.
mine is up!
HA HA. Cops trip me out!
Great 55!
I can believe that - nowadays :-)
You'll find mine here.
Good one! Caught me sleeping!
That 55 had a lot in it. As always, I love yours!
I’m up right HERE
I really enjoyed this one.
HAHAHAHHAHHAHAHA!
Just like two little boys!
You're endings ALWAYS catch me!
LOVED it!
Have a great weekend, m'dear!
X
Fantastic quotation from Akelamalu (2010). I see it as a commentary on how people crave to fit in and often times end up losing themselves in the process.
he,he,he,he we are all human after all!! great 55
Well...after all they are human too! ;)
I'm so pleased you enjoyed it Thom x
My pleasure Deb x
LOL quite Dumdad!
It wouldn't surprise me either SAW ;)
Good idea Brian!
Me too Realliveman!
Yep it's believable Anthony.
Haha caught you eh Buff?
Cheers Susan, I take that as a real compliment. x
I'm glad you did Mike :)
Yep, they never grow up Ron!
Welcome Shopgirl, I'm pleased you like my quote.
Yes indeedy Clean & Crazy :)
I suppose they are Mona :)
Boys and toys!
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This is so good. lol
;)
That's a wonderful surprise ending.
Flash 55 - Priorities
AWESOME!
you make me smile.
HAPPY VALENTINE'S DAY!
and
GONG XI FA CAI!
(means WISHING YOU PROSPERITY! in Mandarin, Chinese)
hugs
shakira
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Too funny! I never saw that coming. The Sargeant is right though, the senior partner always gets to decide who drives!
Well, the officers DO look rather young lately. LOL!
Aloha, Friend!
Comfort Spiral
AKE'S back!!!!!
You twist more than Chubby Checker!
Excellent 55 My Dear.
Thank You for the Friday Smile.
You Rock The Empire Baby..
Have a Kick Ass Week-End..G-Daddy!
many cops are hotheads and it wouldn't surprise me at all!
Work From Home
HA! Those two cops need a time out.
Precisely Cheshire Wife! LOL
Glad to be of help anonymous
Why thankyou Dulce :)
Glad you liked it Nessa :)
Happy Valentines to you too Shakira, I'm happy to make you smile.
The sergeant is ALWAYS right Quilly! ;)
Don't they just Cloudia?!?!
I try G-man LOL
Welcome Nishant. You're right about that!
They do indeed Trav!
Ah, and there's that twist that I so love!!
I didn't see that one coming!
Fabulous ending line.
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It's A Fair Cop !
LOL - what Thom said...!
hi honey: I can see that happening. Boys..i swear. hehehe!
you got me again...i thought tH epolice sargent showed up...later sweets. xxx
I like a twist too Linda :)
Welcome Lynn and thankyou. :)
Quite Tony LOL
Cheers Julia x
Ah got you too eh Spiky?
Very funny. You took me by surprise with this... it was great... and clever.
Thanks Valerie, glad you enjoyed it. :)
This is very funny, but somehow, not surprising. Guys and their vehicles, you know.
I do enjoy the 'twists' you tend to throw at us in these clever creative writing posts.
Hugs and blessings,
Yes you're right Pattiken - boys and vehicles!
Thanks Happily Retired Gal, I'm pleased you enjoy them. :)
hahaha That's awesome. I didn't see that coming at all. Great 55! :)
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