Mum said eat, whether you're hungry or not.
Eat as much as possible, you'll need it if you want to grow up like me.
Munch, munch, 'scrumptious' she thought.
I'm getting full, I'll wrap myself up and sleep now.
The caterpillar awoke to a miracle, she had turned into a beautiful butterfly like her mother.
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22 comments:
Awwwww...so sweet<3
The lovely side of nature. Nice one.
Another nice "flight" of imagination from the pen of Akela!
awww...i love butterflies...if only we turned as beautiful from eating...smiles.
Oh that's lovely!
My mum told me much the same - but I just ended up as a fat caterpillar! :)
Awww that's lovely. I love butterflies and wish they had a longer life.
Thanks Melanie x
It really is Anthony :)
Why thankyou Dumdad x
That would be wonderful for sure Brian!
I was always told to eat up too AJ and I didn't turn into a butterfly either. ;)
Butterflies are the most beautiful creatures I agree Valerie :)
You're so clever making up these flash fictions. I don't think I could do it at all!
My mom loved butterflys. We often see them in Santa Barbara and here in MO. We always say "howdy Grandma" when we see a butterfly.
Those little buggers talk?
Loved your little metamorphic ditty Ake.
Always brings a grin...:-)
Thanks for playing, and have a Kick Ass Week-End
delightful ...
Aw, what a sweet moment this week and no evil twist at the end - though I was waiting for it!
"The caterpillar awoke to a miracle, she had turned into a beautiful butterfly like her mother."
OMG....I LOVE THAT!!!!!
Lovely, 55 Flash, m'dear!
And clever as usual!
Wishing you a beautiful weekend!
X
This might prove a useful adage to get kids to eat their veggies!
If only being beautiful was that easy!
I try to me tolerant of caterpillars knowing they'll be butterflies. Wish they's stay away from my parsley, though!
What a sweet ending!
Metamorphosis :)
I would turn into a plum lol
Man, I wish eating and sleeping would do that to me. :)
Why thankyou Jenny
Butterflies are beautiful Bankerchick :)
Of course they do - to each other G-man! ;)
Thanks Daryl x
I thought I'd have a ethis week Linda ;)
Cheers Ron and the same to you m'deario. x
I think it would appeal to kids Eric :)
Yes indeed, that would be great Cheshire Wife
I know what you mean SAW!
Glad you liked it Mama Zen
Why a plum Lady's Life?
Me too therianverse.com!
Should we really be telling Americans to eat more? ha ha.
Ohhhhhh I LOVE this one! I think this is one of my favorites that you have written!
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