He wasn't supposed to think.
He wasn't supposed to feel.
His sort just had to do as they were told.
Get on with it.
Nothing was too menial a task.
He would never be free.
Never have a wife and family.
Life would stay like this forever, until the end of time......
for the Robot.
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22 comments:
Got me guessing until the last word!
Robbie? R2D2? C3PO?
Always a grin Ake!
Loved your 55
Thanks for playing, and have a Kick Ass Week-End
EXCELLENT finish!
I had no idea until I got to the end!
You are soooooooooooooooo clever!
Great one, m'dear!
Have a wonderful weekend.....X
Ah, when we get them, it will be hard for them ;-)
Just what I intended so that's good Dumdad:)
Glad you enjoyed it G-man x
Ah the twist worked then Ron :)
I think it will Anthony
Great twist!
Hahaha I was feeling desperately sorry for this guy, until I reached the end.
Still twisty, Akelamalu...
clever clever ...
Thanks Mama Zen x
Me too Valerie LOL
I try Julia ;)
Thankyou Daryl xx
You love your twists and turns, I was starting to feel sorry for him.
I think that we all feel like that at times.
its the nuts and bolts of the robot life...smiles...
I actually got this one right though I was waiting for you to throw even more of a twist at the end letting me THINK I'd had it right when I didn't!
Hi there, "A": Very cute! Enjoyed it. Hope all is well in your world tonight. D
An interesting commentary on artificial intelligence.
I felt sorry for him and I was kept guessing till the end.
Maggie X
Nuts in May
I do indeed, glad you enjoy them too BankerChick
I think so too Cheshire Wife
It is Brian ;)
Ah you know me so well Linda LOL
Pleased you enjoyed it Donnetta x
Thanks Trav x
Ah the twist worked then Maggie ;)
Poor, poor robot. He has the hots for that microwave, but there will never be a life for them.
I don't know, some robotic and computer scientists are convinced the robots will eventually take over the world and make us slaves.
Robot can only dream of what might have been Misty ;)
That's a frightening thought Beach!
Wow, yours and mine are almost the same. Rocky finding there's no food there. So, I have to say yours is just brilliant, don't I? LOL
Good thinking!
K
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