Dan watched Angie sleeping.
Tracing his finger over her lips he kissed her tenderly.
Dan deeply regretted the affair with Tricia, it had been a terrible mistake.
Now he was truly thankful to whoever had taken the photograph that ended it.
He really loved his wife,
he just hoped she’d never find out about Tanya.
Tracing his finger over her lips he kissed her tenderly.
Dan deeply regretted the affair with Tricia, it had been a terrible mistake.
Now he was truly thankful to whoever had taken the photograph that ended it.
He really loved his wife,
he just hoped she’d never find out about Tanya.
This is a continuation of my last two Flash 55s #145 here and #144 here.
Friday 55 Flash Fiction is brought to you by G-man (Mr Knowitall). The idea is you write a story in exactly 55 words. If you want to take part pop over and let G-man know when you've posted your 55.
29 comments:
You know, these folks all need a little super glue on their zippers!
Oh dear, when will they ever learn!
And I have a little regret of my own...
Now that was a twist with a serious punch!
Nice twist to this - some people, eh ;-)
Now that's what I call living dangerously...
You got it Quilly!
No they don't Grandpa. I hope your regret can be put right. x
Indeed it was Beach Bum
Thanks Anthony
He does seem to doesn't he Valerie?
Will she or won't she? My gut says she will.
Mine's up.
happy new year honey! thanks for all the visits this past year and hope next year will be the same...
hugs, bee
xoxoxoxoxo
Dan's a lad!
And a Happy New Year to you!
Oh snap! I wasn't expecting THAT!
Teriffic 55, Akelamalu!
Whoa!!!!!!!!!!
LOVED that ending!!!!
applause...applause...applause!
You ALWAYS get me!!!!
Brava, once again!
Happy New Year, m'dear! Thank you for being such a loyal and longstanding blogging friend. I look forward to another year!
X to you and MWM!
Great ending!
Happy new year. Have a wonderful 2011!
Have A Really Great New Year! Bestest Wishes From Tony.
ha. little late for that...but what he does not know...
happy new year!
What a dog!
dear DEAR Ake!
Wishing YOU Aloha from Hawaii
Comfort Spiral
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We can only hope...
Pearlie Mae, you are a shining star in a very dreary world.
Have a Kick Ass 2011
too many regrets like this,well expressed story,
love your plot, beautiful 55.
happy 2011.
Tanya is otherwise known as a Russian Princess so she might also not want this to be known.
lol
HAPPY NEW YEAR!!!
A naughty man indeed.
Now I suspect that it's already 2011 to you, so have a happy!
I expect by now he is onto Theresa!
Have a Happy New Year.
Maggie X
Nuts in May
Karma has a way of evening these things out.
Happy New Year!
Three is a crowd or should that be four?
A Happy New Year to you.
I love the way that you've turned this story into a Flash Fiction Feature!
Haaaaaaaaaaaaa, oh you've truly excelled yourself on this one - wonderful!
I'm sure she will Cheryl ;)
Happy New Year to you too Bee x
Dan's a bad lad Dumdad!
Thanks Eric!
I'm looking forward to spending another year with you too Ron! Glad you enjoyed it hon. x
Thanks AJ, Happy New Year to you too. x
Cheers Tony and the same to you. :)
He'll find out soon enough Brian!
Yes he is Mama Zen!
Hi Cloudia x
Why thankyou G-manxx
I'm so pleased you enjoyed it Jingle :)
I'm sure Tanya doesn't want to be found out either Lady's Life!
He is indeed Trav. Happy New Year to you m'dear.
You could be right Maggie ;)
It does indeed SAW!
I think even Dan's lost count Cheshire Wife!
I'm so pleased you like it Linda x
Aw thanks Shrinky glad you lik it honey. x
LOL...that's perfect and now I know where they came up with the saying grease monkey LOL Happy New Year to you :)
LOL I think your comment was meant for the next post Thom ;)
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