A New Year
“You can’t stay in on New Year’s Eve” said Jilly
Reluctantly Abi went to the party, big mistake.
Reluctantly Abi went to the party, big mistake.
Her heart had died when she’d lost Mark, there was no point anymore.
Midnight chimed.
Abi looked up, tears blurring her vision.
“Happy New Year.
I’m sorry...........
I love you Abi, can we start again?” said Mark.
I’m sorry...........
I love you Abi, can we start again?” said Mark.
Friday 55 Flash Fiction is brought to you by G-man (Mr Knowitall). The idea is you write a story in exactly 55 words. If you want to take part pop over and let G-man know when you've posted your 55.
38 comments:
what a great ending! I love happy endings! Happy 2009 Akela!
Neat love story.
Thanks!
I do like a happy ending too - particlarly at this time of year!
Wow! A happy ending! I love that!
Great 55ve Akelamalu
Happy ending, or happy beginning? Well done, you hopeless romantic!
a happy ending!
smiles, bee
xoxoxoxoxoxoxo
Great story in 55 words! I like the pictures too.
So.. did she say yes?
Great storylette
:-Daryl
new year, new start? cute 55, ake...and jeeeeezzzz, is it friday already? can't focus with this bug i've got. been sick for going on 3 days now :-/
Hi...came by to see who you were. I'm glad you did and I'm glad I followed you here.
More please...
I have to know. If she said no...that is another avenue to take in a story. If she said yes...the story continues to reveal the days to come...more please.
Oh and btw...I'm not leaving yet. I've just met a few more new bloggers and I can't say goodbye just yet. Plus, I have a show to write with ronnie. :D
Ciao honey.
First...let me wish you a very Happy New Years.....sounds like your evenng was fun filled.....
Now this love story of yours in 55 words....my goodness girl...you are good....
Ake, Dear:
We have come to expect really good writing and real heart from these little excercises. You turn them into a high art!
I took a day away from the web yesterday (posted today! ;-)
What did I miss?! LOL!
Happy New Year, Aloha my Friend!
& Hauoli Makahiki Hou to all of our blogging ohana!
As your short story today says: let the good things ressurect . . . now that we're chastened and truly appreciative. Onward to the age of Obama (read: all of us together!)
It had to have a happy ending for the new year Catch :)
You're welcome Nick x
Oh yes a happy ending is a must Flowerpot x
Thanks Mona, glad you enjoyed it.
Me romantic Buff? You got me there! ;)
Of course Bee couldn't have it any other way. :)
I'm so pleased you enjoyed it Pam :)
You can decide Daryl, whatever you like ;)
Yep new start I think Ciara. Sorry to hear you're ill honey. I was sick myself last week. :(
Ah thanks for dropping by Spiky, I'm so pleased to hear you've decided not to pack up just yet now I've found you! The beauty of 55s is that the reader sometimes gets to decide the outcome - this is one of them! ;)
Yes we had a great time RN, so glad you enjoyed the 55.
You need a day off occasionally Cloudia, whatever you miss you can always catch up m'dear. xx
I love happy endings too, but I'm wondering about this fella Mark somehow.
Hugs and blessings,
Good ending!
Oh...this is BRILLIANT!!!!
It's like a mini romance movie, where the viewers get to decide what happens!
Ok...I choose that Ali and Mark start again!!!
*because I'm a total romatic!!!
(ya, know....being a Libra!!)
Tee, hee!
Thanks for a wonderful Flash 55, Akelamalu!
Like I always say..."Clever lady you are!"
Have a great weekend!
X
Great as usual. I tried but exactly 55 words is not easy.
Thanks for giving us a happy ending Akelamalu... with all the sadness that's been going round for the last several days, it's nice to have one.
Say "YES!", Abi - I love love and love happy endings, too!
Great story, Akelamalu - a great way to begin the year!
Awwww.
Ake..? You do have a heart don't you? hehehehe
Wonderfull 55 my dear..
I hope all is going well. Happy New Year.
Thanks for your weekly bit of brilliance for me...Galen
A good happy ending to get the year started off well.
Aww, a sweet Flash 55 to start th year. Happy 2009!
Happy endings, flutterbys, cute little people AND the Temptations!
Wow....
What a wonderful place to land on a Saturday morning.
Thank you for letting me visit.
:-)
A lovely romantic start to the fresh year - smile.
wonderful happy ending!!
thanks, I needed that
love the 55...happy ending !
Looking forward to coming back and visitng you blog more often.
Lovely story to start the year.
Was having problems opening your comments box earlier in the week. Seems to be OK now.
A Happy New Year to you and your family.
Oh! Love your attractive new header too, Gal Pal; Aloha-
Yay! I managed to get into your comment box! I've been having trouble for ages because the butterfly cursor wouldn't turn into an arrow. Grrrrr.
Anywy, Happy New Year, Ak! x
happy ending? did she agree to start all over again? LOL :)
A little bit of romance is good for the soul....
I still get bumped off the internet EVERY time I try to click over here LOL....
x
Mark is sincere Storyteller, he's learned his lesson! ;)
Glad you liked it Maggie :)
I knew you'd like the romantic ending Ron xx
No, it's not easy to write in just 55 words Dr. John but it is satisfying when you manage it! :)
That's just what I was thinking Mojo. :)
I hope Abi said Yes too Linda :)
Of course I have a heart G-man most of my tales have a happy ending. ;)
New year, new start eh Trav :)
Happy start to 2009 definitely Citizen x
Welcome Mel I'm happy you visited and I hope you'll come back often. x
Ah yes a bit of romance is a good way to start isn't it Shrinky!
My pleasure Dianne, glad you liked it m'dear. x
Why thank you Chelle I'm happy you enjoyed the 55 and your visit, please do come back. x
Sorry you've been having trouble with the comments Cheshire Wife and I'm happy it didn't stop you from trying. :)
No new header Cloudia it's been there for ages. I think the change in blog colour and the absence of Christmas decorations just makes it look different m'deario. x
Oh no you've been having trouble too with the comments Laney? I'll have to look into that. :(
You can choos Eelwind if you like a happy ending or she wants revenge!
Oh no Marmie not you too. Why is everyone having trouble with my blog? Any ideas anyone? Help?????
Happy Endings & Beginings Both!
Ahhhh....I love this!!!! Another great one!
Akelamula, I came, but I do not know what you have for me? Thanks for asking me to come over.
For some reason. I really liked that photo of that lady who has a tear in her eye. I think it captures something...
We were definitely both on the same wave length when it came to New Year's Eve. Thanks so much for visiting my blog. Please come back.
Quite Tony! :)
Thanks RLL glad you like it.
It's on tomorrow's post Pam not today's. x
I thought that too when I found it on Google Leon. Thanks for dropping by and taking the time to comment.
I thought that too when I read yours Myrtle!
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