Susan at Stony River hosts this fun theme each Monday, so do pop over and read the others who have signed Mr. Linky. The rules are thus:
Every Monday Susan will post a picture for the subject of your story. Microfiction means the shortest of short stories. Think Aesop's fables, comic strips, or even jokes: complete stories that can be told in under a minute. For this game, the limit is a tweetable 140 characters or fewer, including punctuation.
Here's today's picture and my contribution.
Iron man you have to let me go.
They’re coming for you, you won’t stand a chance!
Go now, I’ll find you when it’s safe.
Hey did I tell you I can see right up your nose from here?
140 characters including punctuation and spaces
140 characters including punctuation and spaces
34 comments:
That made me smile!
Have a lovely Monday. x
Hmmmm...I must say I expected it to be a bit more romantic than that.
Btw, romance is in the air over at The Farm
The Iron Man eh? What a poser! lol! Great start to the week Pearl. xx
Now that's a line to break the ice :-)
Enjoyed that.
Happy to make you smile Laney. Hope you have a happy Monday too. x
Sorry if the lack of romance disappointed Grandpa
Definitely a poser Denise ;)
So glad you enjoyed it Anthony
Laughing socks off here... brilliant.
Hey, I really liked that! I tend to go the humorous route, too!
That is a very funny photo and a cleverly worded piece of Microfiction
Dentists always give me the same thoughts!
Iron Man! Why didn't I think of that?
Haha, that's so clever. Good job with the Microfictions!
I love the twist of this one!
Loved the end and the way it made me smile. I tend to go on the funny side too!
Have a nice week Akela!
I love it when the dramatica takes a turn, "tinned" or otherwise. LOL!
"Hey did I tell you I can see right up your nose from here?"
HAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHA! Brilliant finale line!
Another brava Microfiction, m'dear!
Have a marvi Monday!
X
I'm so pleased you enjoyed it Valerie :)
Humour's good Becky :)
Thankyou Daryl x
I know what you mean Jinksy LOL
LOL Iron Man was the first thing that came to mind when I saw the pic Mama Zen
Cheers Crystalchick x
Thanks Hope :)
Glad you enjoyed it Peggy :)
Me too SparkleFarkle :)
Ron you snuck in whilst I was commenting! Glad you enjoyed it honey. x
LOL...last line was a perfect ending!
The iron man will be able for all that's coming I think. But will she?
It's sometimes good to change the subject when things get too emotional.
Great FF again. I loved the last line! Wonderful.
Oh, yes! Love that last line! How fun! We can all use a good exit line! Have a great week!
Sylvia
Perfect ending ~ thanks for the giggles!
Why thankyou 5th sister :)
Who knows Gaelikaa? I popped over to read you MM but your comments are switched off. I liked it.
I agree Jabblog ;)
Thanks Pam, glad you enjoyed it.
If only we could think of an exit line when we need it though Sylvia! LOL
Happy to make you smile Deb x
very funny!
The dentist's curse.
And not a bogey in sight!
That "up you nose" thing cracked me up. Once again, I didn't see the last line coming.
that last line really made me laugh !!
I was laughing so hard at the first line--great stuff!!! Love it!!!
--snow
Glad you think so Ruthlivingstone :)
I'm sure it is SAW ;)
Hopefully not Trellissimo LOL
I'm pleased the twist got you and it made you laugh Quilly :)
I'm so glad it did Dianne x
Thanks Snow, I'm pleased you enjoyed it. x
Love this Microfiction. I like the ending, funny.
I did one this week too.
Thanks for the nice comment about my owl.
Does it mean he didn't trust her one bit? Is that it?
Love your final line, and....ewww!
:)
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