Gathering the necessary ingredients together
she was apprehensive about the mixing process.
She had the instructions but this was her first time.
She weighed out the necessary quantities, carefully following the recipe.
If it went wrong she wouldn't try again.
She wouldn't be able,
she'd be dead if the bomb exploded while she mixed it!
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31 comments:
Hahaha! Reminded me of Jon's comment about how the IRA mixed the ingrediants for their bombs - just after I asked him to sort out the "bangs" in the christmas crackers! lol!
Very interesting, I was thinking a Martha Stewart-like cooking story and it became a thriller. Excellent!
That's where you get one shot to make it right
smiles Moondustwriter
I'm hoping she's got the recipe right :-)
Nice one.
Now I was NOT expecting that~!
hugs
Sandi
makes one wonder for whome she cooks...
Well, rather her than thousands of others!
keep your head down!
Hm. That must happen all over the world at the moment. Disturbing 55!
I've used some bad recipes before but none were so deadly. :) Excellent surprise!
Ake...
Very explosive 55 My Dear.
This is one recipe' that must be followed to a 'T'.
Thanks for playing Pearlie Mae, and have a Kick Ass Week-End...G
HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!
And allow me to ditto G-Man's awesome comment....
"Very explosive 55, m'dear!"
BOOM!!!!
LOVE the ending!
Have a wonderful weekend, m'dear!
X
Woohoo! I actually guessed correctly this time before I got to the end! Perhaps I'm starting to get to know how your devious mind works!
Happy Friday, m'dear!
Your 55 was DA BOMB, Akelamalu!
what a devilish little twist you put in there!! great 55 again!!
Your Jon's a card Denise LOL
Ah the twist got you Beach Bum ;)
Definitely only one shot Moondustwriter!
She's hoping she got the recipe right Anthony LOL
The twist got you too eh Sandi, that's good.
She cooks for the baddies Brian!
Absolutely right Valerie
Duck Flowerpot!
Unfotunately it's too common these days AJ
Glad you liked the surprise ending Hope
You're always so witty G-man, I love you. :)
So pleased you enjoyed it Ron x
Haha I'll have to try harder if you're guessing the endings Linda!
Why thankyou Eric :)
So glad you liked it Clean&Crazy :)
Now, that's a surprise ending!
I can't it...
akelamalu, I'm laughing at all the puns in your comment section.
I wonder if people who work at those fireworks factories feel like that sometimes?
fabulous 55 honey. xxx
AAAA+
You made me think!
Aloha from Honolulu, Ake Dear :)
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Thanks Mama Zen :)
Working in a fireworks factory must surely be scary Spiky!
Thanks for the A stars Cloudia x
Very good!!! Didn't see that coming..
Peace
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I've missed your 55's - You always have such a great twist ;)
Nice ending. She better follow the recipes very closely.
love your 55.
so striking words..
Yikes!
Perhaps that's a metaphor for my DNA, that must have been a pretty volatile mix!!
'She wouldn't be able' - at least I started guessing a few words from the end!
I always make sure not to see your last line til the very end
you never disappoint
Neat! Made me laugh :)
Thanks Odat
Yikes indeed SAW!
I know what you mean Valerie!
Aw thanks S,D&BS x
Oh yes she needs to be very careful Nessa !
Glad you enjoyed it Nessa :)
Yikes indeed Trav :)
Definitely a volatile mix Gleds
Nearly there Julia! LOL
Why thankyou Dianne x
I'm happy if it made you smile Betty :)
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