Susan at Stony River hosts this fun theme each Monday, so do pop over and read the others who have
signed Mr. Linky. The rules are thus:
Every Monday Susan will post a picture for the subject of your story. Microfiction means the shortest of short stories. Think Aesop's fables, comic strips, or even jokes: complete stories that can be told in under a minute. For this game, the limit is a tweetable 140 characters or fewer, including punctuation and spa
Here's today's picture and my contribution.
A satisfied smirk played on Mary’s lips.
“This’ll teach him not to cheat on me” she fumed
as she rubbed his toupee up and down the washboard.
140 characters including spaces
140 characters including spaces
42 comments:
I love it! LOL! She is as maliciously pasive-aggressive as the lovely wifey in my story.
Ack! Here's the extra S!
Oh that's good. There were times when I felt like that about someone! :)
Such power for a woman scorned.
Hell hath no fury...
So glad you went viral on his butt.
Eeeeeew, but I love it too! :O)
This is a surprising one, indeed. Well done!
Hahaha! PERFECT!
Love your little Christmas countdown widget too!
Having just read your microfiction I think your wifey and mine are sisters Quilly LOL
I think there are times when we all feel like that AJ ;)
Yes power indeed Valerie LOL
You got it Grandpa!
Glad you liked it Cheryl :)
Cheers Diane
Thankyou Dr FTSE :)
I'm pleased you liked the MM and the widget Crystal Chick x
Ok, that was funny.
What a nice surprise at the end.
Loved it!
Ahhh yes! very creative Thanks!
I love it!! Hell hath no fury!! Can't wait to see that toupee!! Have a wonderful week!
Sylvia
Cruel but just ...
priceless!!
I love it! Just too funny.
Perfect! Only thing better would be if he was still wearing it at the time...
She should hang him out to dry instead.
He's in for a big surprise, that's for sure. Nice job!
You get me EVERY TIME!!!!
"as she rubbed his toupee up and down the washboard"
Bwhahahahahahahahahah!
FLAWLESS finish, m'dear!
Brava!
Happy Monday to you!
X
oh, bless his heart.
smiles, bee
xoxoxoxoxoxoxo
I'm happy it made you smile Peggy :)
Thanks Izzy :)
I don't think it would be recognisable as a toupee now Sylvia ;)
I think so too Daryl ;)
Cheers Dianne
Glad you enjoyed it Pam
Ah, now that would be fun Hedgewitch LOL
LOL what a good idea SAW!
He certainly is Lisa LOL
Aw thanks Ron, I'm so pleased you enjoyed it. x
He's a rat Bee, well he'll look like a drowned rat when he gets that toupee on now. LOL
Revenge is sweet and very wet! Loved it!
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ROFL This is one of my favourites! :O)
A strike of genius!
I never saw THAT one coming! Good job!
This was more than a little funny-I give her a thumbs up for pay backs!
LOL!
Google's CHROME browser let me come here. On Firefox I'm hijacked to a commercial site! Glad to be here, my dear :)
Aloha from Hawaii
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That made me laugh!
Gotta love Mary! I can only hope that the guy's toupee withstands the soap and water!
Ha ha! That'll sort him out!
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She should bleach it too!
A 'hairy' interpretation! LOL
You're right there Grandma LOL
Aw thanks Madeleine x
Thanks Suz :)
My twist worked then Hope :)
Glad you enjoyed it Susan
I'm so glad you've found a way to get here Cloudia x
I'm happy to make you smile Trav x
I think it may shrink sylviamorice ;)
It will indeed gaelikaa LOL
What a great idea G-man! LOL
LOL loved the pun Jinksy :)
Sorry to everyone else -- this is my ABSOLUTE favorite this week!
akelamalu: hehehehe. a good one honey. :)
and when he asks 'where's my hair piece?' she can respond with...'hanging on the clothes line.'
later sweetie. xxx
Hilarious--Thanks for the laugh. I'm sure his toupee will have quite a few hairs missing from it after the scrubbing!
1. re the microtale, I like!
2. Thanks for all your messages and support ;->
ps while I remember, did you know Ruth the Gardener, who had a husband who was ill with a brain tumour? He died, it was v sad. Ruth is now in adult ed but I never hear from her. I was just wondering if you knew anything...
Aw thanks SouthLakesMom, I'm flattered. :)
I think she's hung HIM out to dry don't you Spiky? ;)
I think his toupee will be ruined Pat ;)
Glad you enjoyed the MM Gleds. I've commented on your blog about Ruth. x
Sweet revenge :)
Sweet revenge :)
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