Christmas morning found her tearing at the wrapping paper enclosing her Christmas present.
Tricia gently removed the contents and stared at a beautiful silver framed photo,
a perfect shot of her and Dan in a passionate embrace.
She gasped in shock, dismay clutched at her heart.
No doubt now, her husband knew about her affair.
Friday 55 Flash Fiction is brought to you by G-man (Mr Knowitall). The idea is you write a story in exactly 55 words. If you want to take part pop over and let G-man know when you've posted your 55.
31 comments:
Oh boy! The last sentence actually surprised me. Great story!
Ooops!
What a creative husband. This was too funny
Another surprise ending. You're so good at this. I wouldn't trust the husband any more; he just proved he's capable of ... anything.
Whoa...didn't see that coming!!! Excellent.
Here's mine
Hope you can find time to visit.
Happy Friday
Happy weekend.
Ooooo. Merry Christmas! ;)
Another good 'un!
Wow. What a great ending!
dolp! lucy...you got some esplainin to do! nto sure i want to hear what comes next...
"It's The Thought That Counts"! :)
What a clever twist!
You amaze me with you writing. That was really a zinger at the end.
Uh-oh! Looks like somebody's heading for a very NEW year!
What a twist! Nice 55!
Ooops...busted. LOL I'd hate to be in her pumps!!! LOL Very well done my friend. Have a great weekend :)
akelamalu: Ahahaha...busted!
I guess that's one way a husband can tell his wife that he knows...
I'm sure Christmas day is going to suck.
I loved it and I love how your mind just thinks these things up so effortlessly.
ciao honey. xxx
Oh, this is awesome! I never saw it coming.
That was AWESOME. Love surprise endings.
My 55 is HERE .
I'm happy it surprised you Beach Bum :)
Ooops indeed Grandpa LOL
He made a big effort for sure Who ;)
Oh he definitely can't be trusted Valerie ;)
Thankyou Anni, glad you enjoyed it.
Merry Christmas to you too AJ x
Cheers Dumdad
Thankyou Ellie, I'm pleased you liked it. x
She has got some explaining hasn't she Brian? :0
LOL trust you Tony LOL
Why thankyou Daryl I aim to please. :)
You're very kind Pam, I'm pleased you enjoyed it.
You're right there Eric!
Yes she's definitely busted Thom!
I thought it was very sneaky of him spiky but then she'd been sneaky too hadn't she? ;)
Aw thanks Mama Zen :)
Cheers Monkey Man, glad you liked it.
I'm learning! I anticipated the ending of this one -- which was perfect as usual!
Oh dear, that can't possibly be good! But I must say that once again I totally loved the twist!
Ouch! I hate it when that happens to me. :-)
Ake...
Twisty and brilliant as usual!
Loved your 55 My Dear.
Thank you for playing, and have a Kick Ass Week-End...G
Bwhahahahahahahahaha!
OMG, how funny!
What a FLAWLESS way to let someone know you know!
Another brilliant 55 Flash, m'dear!
You ROCK!
Have a wonderful weekend!
X
Ouch! Powerful piece. I wonder what happened next.
Ah you're getting good Quilly ;)
Thanks Linda
That happened to you SAW???? :0
Cheers G-man x
Dramatic way to do it I thought Ron. ;)
Thanks Stranger. I may do a follow up next week. ;)
very nice post i like too....
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Be sure your sins will find you out! As the saying goes.
Maggie X
Nuts in May
OMG what a way to expose her!
Oh my!
Thanks Darwin
A very true saying Maggie!
Sneaky wasn't it Alice!
Oh my indeed Seth ;)
oh oh!! lol
I usually love to do my Christmas shopping during the whole year so when it comes time for it I don't have to do anything but think of Christmas puddin. lol
Lately however, I have been very lax and leave things to the last minute.Sooo not like me at all.
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