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Friday 18 July 2008

Friday 55 Flash Fiction # 36 Spiked?

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He’d insisted she had a drink, though they’d only just met.











She’d gone along with a friend who knew him.



She was enjoying herself dancing and flirting.
















Suddenly she felt sick…… the room spinning……..




It must have been the drink!











Luckily her Mum had just arrived to take her home from Johnny’s 10th Birthday party.



Friday 55 Flash Fiction is brought to you by G-man (Mr Knowitall). The idea is you write a story in exactly 55 words. If you want to take part pop over and let G-man know when you've posted your 55.

13 comments:

Pam said...

lmao ake...i wonder what a 10 yr old could've put in her drink. i love your 55 :) hope your having a fab time on your holiday xoxo

la bellina mammina said...

cute one! :-)

And yes, am jealous of your Greek trip - waiting for your postcard! Have a great vacation!

Flowerpot said...

I love that last picture - great!

Queenie said...

Must have been the shandy! I bet your not thinking about 55s where you are...

G-Man said...

Ake...
Greece....
Ouzo...
Metaxa....
OPA!!!!!!!!!!!

Thanks for playing...Have a GREAT Time...G

Linda said...

Those darn kids sure are starting young these days! Too cute!

Have a fantastic weekend!

Sandi McBride said...

Uh huh, you're off vacationing while a 10 year old is drinking God only knows what and having fainting spells and all...and just as I'm thinking WHERE IS HER MOTHER up she pops to take the child home...and leave me hanging...what was in the drink????
Anyway, have fun in the Greek Isles...
Sandi

CG said...

ROFL!

Ron said...

Cute, Akelamalu!

Sounds like me...a dramatic child!

Hey, I bet you're in Greece right now, sipping some awesome red wine and dancing on the tables!

Enjoy!

Miss ya!

Mona said...

That is cute! The drink was too much for the ten year old I guess :)

storyteller said...

Ohmygosh!!! That’s really sick … but after the Oprah show I just watched about kids becoming video porn stars (unbeknownst to their parents in the next room) I guess anything is possible. Sigh!
Hugs and blessings,

Anonymous said...

Those pre-teen parties can be murder.

Akelamalu said...

Too much coke methinks Ciara :)

Didn't send any postcards Bella but I will be blogging all about it soon. :)

LOL I felt like that on holiday once or twice Flowerpot!

It't wasn't diet coke Queenie!

Yes g-man we had plenty of all those things!

Yes they do start young these days Linda!

Giddy with excitement I think Rebicmel. ;)

Ah I knew her Mum was on the way Sandi before I set of for the airport. ;)

Glad to make you smile CG

Definitely a drama queen she was Ron!

Cola is quite strong you know Mona ((wink))

Sick Storyteller? It was supposed to be funny, you know how kids get sick at parties eating too much ice-cream?

Can't they just Citizen?