Relax
Surrounded by candles, the bath water fragrant and frothy.
Champagne on ice, glass ready, just what she needed after the day she’d had.
He’d gone to so much trouble preparing it, how thoughtful of him.
It could only get better.
“Are you relaxed honey?” he smiled
Just before he threw the hairdryer into the water!
Friday 55 Flash Fiction is brought to you by G-man (Mr Knowitall). The object of the game is to write a story using exactly 55 words. If you want to take part pop over and let G-man know when you've posted your 55.
38 comments:
Ha! Brilliant. I'll be suspicious if my husband ever draws a bath for me now.
omgoodness, ake! you've been getting on the dark side lately lol :) i love it! another fabulous 55 :)
p.s. mine will be up in 15 mins lol
Excellent Ak - another winner!
hahaha. ciara's comment is cute. made me laugh.
this 1's entertaining, akelamalu. =D
lol, now that's a great twist. :D Excellent tt, AK.
You're sort of intrigued by murder, aren't you?
Ake...
Now lets hope that there was a circuit breaker in that house!!!
Great job sweetie!!
Thanks for playing!!!
And maybe you just just "shower" for a while((wink))..
I just LOVE Pearls..xox
Ooh, didn't see it coming!
Also, I've nearly read the entire memoir about your grandmother's life - it's great - I couldn't resist as my grandmother was also called Kit. x M
As always - a great twist in your tales! And it just feels so appropriate to me after the day I had yesterday!
I'm less frazzled today... ;0)
oh no! good one again!
smiles, bee
xoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxo
EEK! I didn't expect that ending!
Peace - D
Hannibal Lector be afeared - Akela is on the prowl!
Hmm, I'm beginning to see a pattern here to some of your Flash Fictions!
Cool! Love the dark side!
Well done! I’m finally learning to anticipate a twist in these Friday Fictions. You’ve got a devious imagination my dear ;--)
Hugs and blessings,
Blimey I didn't expect that Akela, hee hee. Brilliant.
That actually made me jump!
That actually made me jump!
GAH! Now that caught me by surprise.
Mwahaha... sinister in just the right way.
And tag! You're it!
Now that gave me cold chills, lol...then a hot flash...hmm, good read!
Sandi
Hi, "A". I didn't see that one coming at all! What a guy. So accommodating. Gotta love him. Donnetta
OH MY GOD, Akelamalu...between last Friday's 55 and this one...I would SWEAR your planning something wonderful!!
Damn...what an electrifying way to go!
tee, hee!
Thoroughly enjoyed it, dear lady!
Have a great weekend!
LOL me too Jennifer!
Mmm yes, I have rather haven't I Ciara
Thanks Flowerpot :)
Cheers Acey x
Why thankyou James :)
Now you've mentioned it I guess I am Buff
Good idea g-man ((wink))
I'm so pleased you're enjoying reading KIT Marianne, thankyou. xx
Good to hear you're calmer now Cath x
Thankyou Bee x
Ah it worked then Momma! :)
LOL you make me laugh Dumdad :)
I'll have to change the pattern now then Linda ((wink))
Cheers Dianne
I've never been called devious before Storyteller ((wink))
Glad you enjoyed it Jo x
Really MOTL? Cool!
Oh great Trav, that was the intention.
I'll check out the tag Julia, and thanks.
Thankyou Sandi :)
Not the sort you'd want to live with though eh Donnetta? ;)
I think I'd better do a lighter one for next week Ron :)
OMG! That is just terrible!
I mean the plan!
The 55 is great!
Your 55's have taken a sinister turn of late, missus! Something you are not telling us...?!
You are evil!! Didn't see THAT coming!!
Ak, you are funny and EVIL! HA!
Thankyou Mona :)
Mmmm they have haven't they GIM? I've no idea why :0
Moi evil CG? ;)
Funny and Evil me Teach? I suppose that was a bit evil!
I was not prepared for the last line. However, I should have been.
[:-)
The last line was so unexpected. I love it.
Yes,,,evil!!! hehe.
Great 55!
Peace
You didn't guess Nick?
Thanks KB, I enjoyed yours too. :)
I know it is evil Odat ;)
Yikes! This one took a gruesome turn!!
And, suddenly the rest of her day didn't matter anymore.
Whoa! I kinda like it when you get that little 'evil-twitch' to ya ;-) Course, then again, I AM a fan of Mysteries and Horror. hehe
LOVE it Ake!
It did rather didn't it Citizen? :(
I like mysteries and horror too Misty :)
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