Dinner?
“I know we’ve only just met but come to dinner?’ he asked
“7.30 tomorrow, I’ll cook, here’s my address.”
“What a lovely place, are these new carpets, they’re still covered in plastic?”
“Impressive range of knives and pans you have, you obviously like cooking.”
“Oh I do” he said
What’s for dinner?” she asked
“You”!
Friday 55 Flash Fiction is brought to you by G-man (Mr Knowitall). The object of the game is to write a story using exactly 55 words. If you want to take part pop over and let G-man know when you've posted your 55.
27 comments:
very cleverly done, ake! yes, your daddy's right...you have a great imagination! xo my 55 will be up at midnight here on my side of the world lol
Well done! I just clicked past a TV channel last night to avoid seeing Hannibal only to meet him here!
well done ak - as ever. I never saw Hannibal - there's no way I'd sleep again if I did!
I'll bring the Chianti....
Once again you are creative as always...and yes like the previous commentor I too shall bring some Chianti
NOOOOOOO!
Well Ake...
have the lambs stopped screaming?
Great job sweetie!!!
Everyone but Smoofy is a bit on the Dark Side today!!
Have a great week-end!
Galen..xox
very well done my friend!
smiles, bee
xoxoxxoxoxoxoxo
Hard to get creepier than Hannibal Lecter. Good ending.
Hee hee, fabulous as usual. Catching up here. Loved the doodles and hope Dan had a fab birthday. Have a brill weekend lovely Akela.
HOW DID YOU KNOW THAT HANNIBAL WAS MY FAVORITE CHARACTER! I liked this nearly as much as doodle week, lol...
Sandi
I'll be over to read your later Ciara, thanks honey. x
Ooops sorry Nick, you were destined to meet him!
It's a scary film that's for sure Flowerpot, and thanks.
I'll get the glasses out Buff!
Oh and an extra glass for you RN. x
YEEEEESSSSSS GIM :0
It must be the hot weather g-man! :)
Thankyou Bee xx
Yup Hannibal was definitely creepy Citizen!
Thanks on all counts Jo, hope you have a great weekend too. x
You like Hannibal Sandi? Let's pretend I wrote it just for you then. x
I love that the carpet is still covered in plastic! Fantastic detail.
{{{SHUDDER}}}
This reminds me of a real life incident in my sister's neighborhood, where a psychopath Nanny killed & cooked the baby for dinner!
Akelamau, great fiction piece! But when I read there was plastic on the carpet I just knew there was going to be trouble - I guess I watch CSI and Law and Order too much! Ha! :)
Thanks Dianne x
OMG is that true Mona? :0
Me too Teach! ;)
Ohmygosh … that one took me totally by surprise until I saw the last photo!!! I’ve shared a bit of what I’ve learned in my Photoshop Elements class on each of my blogs today … all in Haiku … with illustrations because I’m having such fun playing with possibilities ;--)
Hugs and blessings,
Whoa! Yikes!!
Wasn't Anthony Hopkins just an excellent Hannibal!! One of my favorite movies of all time. :)
--snow
aha! got me again.....good one.
Peace
eeeeewwww! This one gave me the CHILLS!!
VERY, VERY GOOD!!!
Wasn't it the most scariest movie??
I loved it!
As always...you're brilliant, Akelamalu!
I so enjoy these!
Have a great weekend, my friend!
Ah, Anthony, my favorite man in the whole wide world! This was neat-fun. Of course, I have a warped sense of humor!
Donnetta
OMG!
That was scary!
Well done...
Sweetie, how am gonna sleep now...
have a good weekend!
love and ((hugs))
bindi
Ah the surprise worked Storyteller :)
Antony Hopkins was fantastic as Hannibal - too real Snowelf!
Thanks Odat :)
You're very kind Ron, thanks honey. x
I love everything Antony does too Donnetta :)
Oh no, don't have nightmares Bindi :(
HA! I kept waiting for the twist, but you tweaked it by going exactly for the obvious!
Well done!
Bwahahahahaha - I LOVE it!! I think this is my favorite one so far!!!
Got to keep you on your toes Trav :)
Cheers Misty x
I loooooooooooovvvvvvvvvvveeeeeeeee that movie. Thanks for commenting on my first 55. I'll have another crack at one on Friday, it sure is fun!
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