He opened the door.
"Can I help you?" he enquired.
"I hope so" said the young man.
His face paled as he read the contents of the envelope that he'd been handed.
His past had come back to haunt him.
He'd never thought this would happen when he donated his sperm, twenty one years ago.
Friday 55 Flash Fiction is brought to you by G-man (Mr Knowitall). The idea is you write a story in exactly 55 words. If you want to take part pop over and let G-man know when you've posted your 55.
22 comments:
Brilliant, as usual. You have a gift for thinking up a clever plot.
Oh Wow! You never know what's round the corner waiting to change your life...lol.
Well, he should have thought about that shouldn't he?
Nice 55
I can remember an elderly friend saying exactly this years ago! Blog update over at mine x
Oh that's fabulous!!
CJ x
Oops! Haunting him....It couldn't be good news!
Uh oh!
DAMN! That's gonna leave a mark!! Excellent!!!
Clever as usual, m'dear!
You always get me with your surprise endings!
Faaaabulous!
Have a great weekend....X
Why thankyou Jenny :)
You certainly don't Valerie!
He was young and broke at the time AJ ;)
Really Flowerpot? WOW!
Thanks CJ x
Not good news for him Bankerchick!
Yeah SAW!
It is indeed Melanie ;)
Glad you enjoyed it Ron x
Yikes! You do the best 55s, Ake!
Sounds more like a random distribution than a donation. LOL!
Surprise indeed! Very well done.
It all depends where the donating was done at...:-)
Very dramatic Ake...
But as always...Loved It!!
Thanks for playing, and have a Kick ASS Week-End...G
O bloody hell! That can't happen in real life, can it?
Did you know in America you actually get paid for donating BLOOD (as well as sperm)... some poor people donate so much they end up passing out on the streets..!!
where do you even get the ideas, let alone the gems you come up with - amazing
Excellent writing!
Yeah, that would be scary but I can understand why a kid would go looking for his sperm donor father.
oh my...i would hope not as well...uncomfortable for sure!
Oh bummer !
Why thankyou Mama Zen, how kind of you. x
I guess it does Eric
Thanks Linc
That's true G-man, glad you liked it. x
Well according to Flowerpot (above) it can Gleds! I knew about blood donors being paid in the US.
I think I must have a warped mind Lorraine ;)
I can understand them looking too Beach.
A surprise certainly Brian
Yeah Lady's Life
well done
this would be a great start to a movie
Oh yes I can see how that would pan out Dianne!
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