Susan at Stony River hosts this fun theme each Monday, so do pop over and read the others who have
signed Mr. Linky. The rules are thus:
Every Monday Susan will post a picture for the subject of your story. Microfiction means the shortest of short stories. Think Aesop's fables, comic strips, or even jokes: complete stories that can be told in under a minute. For this game, the limit is a tweetable 140 characters or fewer, including punctuation and spa
Here's today's picture and my contribution.
The head teacher thought that the deer sporting the team scarf and hat was encouraging.
However, personally, he would not be seen dead in it.
140 characters
25 comments:
I'm not sure the deer is too happy about it either!
Great Microfiction.
Oh deer! Nice one, Akela.
Neither would I, Akelamalu!
Poor deer ..
...and the principal won't even wear the outfit. Poor deer is right.
Very nice Akela!
Clever irony in that ;-)
Neither would the deer if he had his way. A very clever microfiction.
the poor things looks a bit light in the antlers to me!
smiles, bee
xoxoxoxoxoxo
OMG, that last line was absolutely BRILLIANT!
"However, personally, he would not be seen dead in it."
Bwahhahahahahhahahahhhaha!
You are sooooo clever, m'dear!
Have a great Monday!
X
I guess the buck has to stop somewhere!
Nice word play!
:Dom
Ah, those teachers! What do they know about "cool"!! Fun one for the day!
Sylvia
I'm sure you're right AJ!
Hehe, thanks Dumdad
Me neither Grandpa!
Indeed Daryl
Quite Peggy!
Yes it is ironic Anthony
The poor deer had no say in it though Valerie :(
Ah yes it does Bee
Cheers Ron, glad you got the punchline. :)
And your play on words too Dominic :)
Teachers don't appreciate their student's idea of fun do they Sylvia? ;)
Cute but he looks a little stiff in it.
At least the deer is a good sport in that hat.
Very cute!!
--snow
I don't think he had a choice!
I always take a breath before I read your closing lines
it's like anticipating something delicious
you never disappoint
Too bad the deer did not have the same choice.... :O)
Yea team! LOL!
That last deadpan line is a great finisher :)
Seems like such an undignified way to treat the poor dead deer.
akelamalu: Oh deer!!!! :)
Um...Go bucks!
hang in there...YAY!
that was my cheer. :) xx
As ever I love your twist! LOL!
He does look a little stiff the guy in the silk taffeta dress said... ! Welcome and thanks for taking the time to comment. :)
The deer was sport Snowelf! :0
No he didn't Jinksy :(
Why thankyou Dianne, I'm so pleased you enjoy them. x
Quite Diane, sad isn't it?
I think that was the idea behind it Susan
Thanks septembermom, I'm glad you liked it. :)
I agree SAW
Loved your cheer Spiky
So pleased you enjoy them Quilly x
Teacher said, 'Someone has to be dressed up! Just this once, ok?' Phew!
LOL. That was so funny!
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