Susan at Stony River hosts this fun theme each Monday, so do pop over and read the others who have signed Mr. Linky. The rules are thus:
Every Monday Susan will post a picture for the subject of your story. Microfiction means the shortest of short stories. Think Aesop's fables, comic strips, or even jokes: complete stories that can be told in under a minute. For this game, the limit is a tweetable 140 characters or fewer, including punctuation and spaces.
Here's today's picture and my contribution.
Daniel was worried about his girlfriend.
Since the bang on the head she was seeing stars
but even worse, kept going on about wanting a baby!
35 comments:
Love it! My Monday project is based on a close up photo!
Oh poor Daniel. Let's hope she gets over the concussion before she has FIVE babies!
Oh my! I hope she and Daniel have a serious talk about this before . . .
But they're so cute...
Only you could've done that with that picture - You are too funny!!
Well I've heard of five star status ...
Good one, once again.
Hey, I loved this one!! Very good!!
Oh dear. Broodiness. No good at all :-)
Enjoyed that.
Oh, I love it! Really funny take for the day! Watch what you wish for! Have a great week!
Sylvia
Alela;
O.M._goodness!
Daniel better take precautions if he's not ready!
Good take this week my friend.
I just love what we are coming up with - yours is terrific.
Thanks Mrs N
I think that's what Daniel is hoping too Morning AJ ;)
I'm sure they will South Lakes Mom!
I know Julia ;)
Aw thanks Eternally Distracted, so pleased you enjoyed it.
Cheers Valerie :)
Thankyou Becky :)
That's exactly what Daniel was thinking Anthony!
Glad you liked it Sylvia :)
Yes he'd better Peggy! ;)
I love the different takes on the picture too RNSane. Glad you enjoyed mine. :)
I admire how you manage this - I thought flash fiction was hard, but this is something else altogether...
applause...applause...applause!
Loved that final line!
You've done it again, m'dear!
Sheer brilliance!
Thank you for sharing.
Happy Monday...X
In 3 lines u managed to say a lot...
Brilliance...
So funny! Loved it!
Have a great week x
He'd better bonk her on the head again to see if it clears up!
Hit his own head and he may see babies and want stars! I've gone for science for today's 140
LOL....maybe she'll stop if she bangs her head again! Great job this week--made me laugh.
It's time for Daniel to have a serious talk with his girlfriend!
Great take on this week's picture.
This one made me smile! Thank you.
Yeah, the word "baby" makes a lot of guys worry1
creative one!
Surprising what a bang on the head will do! Ouch!
Maggie X
Nuts in May
gaelikaa I'm glad you enjoyed it, it's easier than you think honestly. :)
Aw thanks Ron you're a doll. x
Why thankyou so much swputh, how kind you are. :)
I'm so pleased you liked it Ellie
He's probably already thought of that solution Mama Badger LOL
I wonder if he's thought of that solution John? :0
Daniel's probably hoping just that sylviamorice!
I think he will be doing just that Pat! ;)
I'm happy to make you smile Hope x
I wonder why Quilly? ;)
Cheers Jingle :)
A bang on the head can cause all sorts of problems Maggie and not just for the recipient! ;)
Great Job Ake...
And hear I thought that you were going to say that she had been seeing stars while sitting outside naked!
I named the last baby I miscarried "Meteor" because it's life was as fleeting as a shooting star - this illustration reminds me of that.
Well, if he didn't want those little stars, he shouldn't have hit her so hard!
I hope it clears up for them both soon LOL
What a hilarious take on the picture!
Cheers G-man x
Well that could have happened Linda ;)
I'm so sorry for your loss SAW. What a lovely way to remember your baby - as a shooting star. x
I don't think he hit her Susan but he's certainly regretting her getting a bang on the head! LOL
Thanks Mama Zen :)
Oh the lanes your mind travels, Akelamalu...
Either you want them or you don't...there's no middle ground on this one.
Wah wah waaah!!
I know Mimi, worrying isn't it? ;)
That's true Trav!
Wa Gleds!
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