Quick Draw
Carlos picked up his gun.
Marco had got the better of him to often.
They faced each other and drew their guns, seemingly at the same time.
Carlos's shot hit Marco clean between the eyes,
before Marco even had time to pull the trigger
of his water pistol.
Friday 55 Flash Fiction is brought to you by G-man (Mr Knowitall). The idea is you write a story in exactly 55 words. If you want to take part pop over and let G-man know when you've posted your 55.
I won't be doing a 55 next week as I'll be in Poland on a mini break.
27 comments:
hehe nice twist, ake! :) lucky you to be going to poland. wish i could come, too. hehe i'm up.
Poland? How amazing - looking forward to hearing about that Ak!
This story makes a bit of a splash!
Have fun in Poland.
Gives a whole new meaning to pistols at dawn.
Enjoy your break in Poland.
POLAND????
Have a few Piorgi's for me!!
Thanks for playing, and have a Great Week-End...G
Have a safe trip x
Have a good time in Poland, and don't forget the water pistol!
Oh wow!
Poland. How exciting. Enjoy!!
Have a great mini-excursion. My sister-in-law is from Poland - I'd better not tell her you're going or she'll get homesick.
Unexpected fun! Loved it...
hugs
Sandi
ps
Marco better watch his back!
lol, great 55 and an even better twist. :D
Whew! I was hoping it was going to be something like that!
water gun!?! ha ha ha ha ha
smiles, bee
xoxoxoxooxoxoxo
Thanks Ciara, I'll you all about my trip when we get back. :)
I'll take lots of photographs to show you Flowerpot
Very witty Dumdad :)
It does, doesn't it Cheshire Wife? ;)
I don't know what a Piorgi is G-man, but if you say I should have some I will! ;)
Oh Buff I don't think I've got room in my suitcase for the water pistol! ;)
I'm banking on having a good time Sally! :0
I wish I'd known about your sister in law being from Poland earlier Jula, she could have given me some tips on what to see and where to go!
Carlos had better watch his Sandi!
Thanks James, glad you liked it.
They had to be water pistols Linda I hate guns.
A relief eh Bee?
Poland ... nice .. cant wait to see the pix
enjoy and travel safe
:-Daryl
I always love these. You have such a gift!
Squirt, squirt, speack before you go to Poland...
aloha dear;
Loved the twist in your concise little story. your sites music ROCKS!!!!!!
Enjoy Poland; please take some pictures to share with us.
Cheers from Waikiki
ake, this is so fun to read! you're really great with stories with unique twists. :D
have a safe and fun trip!!! :D you take care, ok?
Whew! it was a game of water pistols!
You are the queen of twists in the end Akela! :D
Well that was one good story in fifty five words. Some Friday I'll have to try that.
OMG...this was TOOO funny!
You had me eagerly anticipating this!!!
Hey...have an AWESOME time in Poland! Can't wait for you to share the photos!!!
Have a great weekend, Akelamalu!
Very, very cute, "A." I enjoyed it! Mine's up, too. D
now that's the kind of gun play I can live with !!!
safe trip
Thanks Daryl, hopefully I'll have lots of photos to show you.
You've very kind to say so RLL thanks. x
Speak Monday Queenie x
It's really time I changed my music Cloudia but it will be more Motown I promise. :)
I'm so pleased you enjoy these 55s Acey. x
What a compliment, thank you Mona :)
I'd love to see what you come up with D. John - it would be something good I bet!
I'm happy I didn't disappoint your anticipation Ron. I'll tell you all about Poland when I get back. x
Cheers Donnetta, I'll be over to read yours shortly.
Me too Dianne, though I really don't like guns at all.
I love a nice mini-holiday. Enjoy!
We love our mini-breaks too Trav :)
Just when I was thinking you’d gotten a little too violent for me, you dropped the surprise. I should have known ;--)
Hugs and blessings,
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