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Friday, 17 October 2008

Friday 55 Flash Fiction #48 No secrets

No Secrets

"Where did you end up last night?" she asked


"In the pub with the lads" he answered.


"Nowhere else?" she ventured.


"No."


"You know Mandy has a new job?" she said.


"Mmmmm, what's she doing?" he asked.


"She's scanning the CCTV cameras in town



and guess who she saw going into the Lap Dancing Club?"


Friday 55 Flash Fiction is brought to you by G-man (Mr Knowitall). The idea is you write a story in exactly 55 words. If you want to take part pop over and let G-man know when you've posted your 55.

40 comments:

Ron said...

ooooh....I'm the first comment!!!

Yeepee!

BRAVO, Akelamalu!!!!

This was FABULOUS!!!!

BAD BOY!!!

Well..I guess he'll be Lap Dancing alone on the couch tonight!

HAHAHAHA!

Have a great weekend, dear lady!

Enjoyed this!

Elaine said...

This was great Ak! And I loved her expression, lol.

(I actually caught my Mum's boyfriend going nto a 'grab a granny' night years ago when he was supposed to be at home fixing his car!)

Queenie said...

Tut, Tut, good one!!!!

Lu' said...

Ha this was good. Have a great Friday :)

storyteller said...

Most entertaining as always! Hope you enjoy your weekend ;--)
Hugs and blessings,

Empress Bee (of the High Sea) said...

oh man, he has so had it!

smiles, bee
xxoxoxoxoxoxoxo

Sally said...

Well done you! Very clever!!

ciara said...

ha ha lmao. good one, ake!

i'm finally up.

Flowerpot said...

Great Ak - well done!

buffalodick said...

As a 35year veteran of getting away with it, I am the master of the less than straight answer...

Linda said...

Busted!! It seems a man just can't any privacy these days, can he?!?

Akelamalu said...

Spare room for him Ron, indefinitely!

OMG Laney, did you tell your Mum? :0

Tut, tut indeed Queenie!

Thanks Lu, hope you have a good one too. x

Enjoy your weekend too and thanks Storyteller.

Oh yes he has Bee!

Long time no see Sally, thanks m'dear.

Cheers Ciara x

Aw thanks Flowerpot x

Ah but have you ever been caught on CCTV Buff?

Busted is right Linda, he shouldn't tell lies! :)

cheshire wife said...

You mean he's been on TV.

Skittles said...

Exactly 55 words? Wow.. you rock! I love the pictures you used to illustrate the story. :)

Real Live Lesbian said...

Great job! I always love these!

Deb said...

Perfect story told in 55 words! Happy weekend! :)

citizen of the world said...

The sequel - 55 words about divorce court.

Sandi McBride said...

Wonderful story telling, beginning to end! Loved it...loved him getting caught, too lol
hugs
Sandi

Donnetta Lee said...

Great, "A!" Oh, the irony of it. My 55 is up, too. D

la bellina mammina said...

" Er, who..??" asked he, not smartly knowing where this is leading, still hungover... ;-)

Mona said...

CCTV are like Big brother watching!

Errant husbands beware!

Great 55ve Ake!

Akelamalu said...

Close circuit TV yes Cheshire Wife :)

I have Google images to thank for the pictures Skittles, glad you like it.

Thanks RLL x

Happy Weekend to you too Deb, so pleased you enjoyed it.

Ah, that's an idea Citizen ;)

He deserved to get caught didn't he Sandi?

Thanks Donnetta x

Ah yes Bella, not smart enough to know when to quit!

Yes indeedy MonaBig brother is watching!

G-Man said...

hehehehe..(Must hide face, must hide face)
Loved this one Ake, of course that could have been me.
Thanks for playing, sorry I'm so late. I read your previous post..What a Jip!!
Have a Great Week-End....G

Akelamalu said...

You do that g-mna??? ;)

MarmiteToasty said...

Brilliant lol

x

Akelamalu said...

Aw thanks Marmie x

Travis said...

Ooops. Looks like somebody is going to be in trouble!

acey said...

oh my gosh, this 1 made me laugh. it's very clever, ake. i love your materials. hehe. =D

Akelamalu said...

Yep he sure is Trav!

Thank you Acey you're very kind.

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