No Secrets
"Where did you end up last night?" she asked
"In the pub with the lads" he answered.
"Nowhere else?" she ventured.
"No."
"You know Mandy has a new job?" she said.
"Mmmmm, what's she doing?" he asked.
"She's scanning the CCTV cameras in town
and guess who she saw going into the Lap Dancing Club?"
Friday 55 Flash Fiction is brought to you by G-man (Mr Knowitall). The idea is you write a story in exactly 55 words. If you want to take part pop over and let G-man know when you've posted your 55.
36 comments:
ooooh....I'm the first comment!!!
Yeepee!
BRAVO, Akelamalu!!!!
This was FABULOUS!!!!
BAD BOY!!!
Well..I guess he'll be Lap Dancing alone on the couch tonight!
HAHAHAHA!
Have a great weekend, dear lady!
Enjoyed this!
This was great Ak! And I loved her expression, lol.
(I actually caught my Mum's boyfriend going nto a 'grab a granny' night years ago when he was supposed to be at home fixing his car!)
Tut, Tut, good one!!!!
Ha this was good. Have a great Friday :)
Most entertaining as always! Hope you enjoy your weekend ;--)
Hugs and blessings,
oh man, he has so had it!
smiles, bee
xxoxoxoxoxoxoxo
Well done you! Very clever!!
ha ha lmao. good one, ake!
i'm finally up.
Great Ak - well done!
As a 35year veteran of getting away with it, I am the master of the less than straight answer...
Busted!! It seems a man just can't any privacy these days, can he?!?
Spare room for him Ron, indefinitely!
OMG Laney, did you tell your Mum? :0
Tut, tut indeed Queenie!
Thanks Lu, hope you have a good one too. x
Enjoy your weekend too and thanks Storyteller.
Oh yes he has Bee!
Long time no see Sally, thanks m'dear.
Cheers Ciara x
Aw thanks Flowerpot x
Ah but have you ever been caught on CCTV Buff?
Busted is right Linda, he shouldn't tell lies! :)
You mean he's been on TV.
Exactly 55 words? Wow.. you rock! I love the pictures you used to illustrate the story. :)
Great job! I always love these!
Perfect story told in 55 words! Happy weekend! :)
The sequel - 55 words about divorce court.
Wonderful story telling, beginning to end! Loved it...loved him getting caught, too lol
hugs
Sandi
Great, "A!" Oh, the irony of it. My 55 is up, too. D
" Er, who..??" asked he, not smartly knowing where this is leading, still hungover... ;-)
CCTV are like Big brother watching!
Errant husbands beware!
Great 55ve Ake!
Close circuit TV yes Cheshire Wife :)
I have Google images to thank for the pictures Skittles, glad you like it.
Thanks RLL x
Happy Weekend to you too Deb, so pleased you enjoyed it.
Ah, that's an idea Citizen ;)
He deserved to get caught didn't he Sandi?
Thanks Donnetta x
Ah yes Bella, not smart enough to know when to quit!
Yes indeedy MonaBig brother is watching!
hehehehe..(Must hide face, must hide face)
Loved this one Ake, of course that could have been me.
Thanks for playing, sorry I'm so late. I read your previous post..What a Jip!!
Have a Great Week-End....G
You do that g-mna??? ;)
Brilliant lol
x
Aw thanks Marmie x
Ooops. Looks like somebody is going to be in trouble!
oh my gosh, this 1 made me laugh. it's very clever, ake. i love your materials. hehe. =D
Yep he sure is Trav!
Thank you Acey you're very kind.
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