Thursday, 1 September 2011

Friday 55 Flash Fiction #175 Demolition...

Harry removed the doors and windows of the conservatory and smiled as he wielded the sledgehammer, demolishing the walls.

Arriving home from work Janice watched open mouthed.

"What do you think you're doing?" screamed Janice.

Harry carried on.

"Stop, stop now please!" pleaded Janice.

"Too late" said Harry grinning smugly,

"you should've paid the bill!"

Friday 55 Flash Fiction is brought to you by G-man (Mr Knowitall). The idea is you write a story in exactly 55 words. If you want to take part pop over and let G-man know when you've posted your 55.


Empress Bee (of the high sea) said...

oh no! pay the bill fast!!!

smiles, bee

Cloudia said...

oh MY!

Aloha from Waikiki;

Comfort Spiral
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Ron said...

Oh, GREAT one, m'dear!

Never saw that ending coming.


Have a wonderful weekend!


snowelf said...

I read the first lines and said "Whoa!" right out loud.
Shame on her--she's getting what she paid for. ;)


Beach Bum said...

Great story!

MorningAJ said...

Oh dear! Sometimes I wish I could set about contractors with a sledgehammer for their lack of service!

Gledwood said...

those who live in glass houses should not throw stones (or weild sledgehammers)

Akelamalu said...

I always pay my bills on time Bee so this doesn't happen!

I know Cloudia!

Ah got you again eh Ron. x

Yes she is Snow ;)

Thanks Beach x

Yes the same can apply AJ.

Exactly Gleds :)

G-Man said...

Boy....Talk about being Strict!
Loved your 55 Ake.
Always Classy, Always creative.
Thanks for playing, And have a Kick Ass Week-End

Valerie said...

Hmmm what I want to know is ... why didn't he pay the bill?

Dianne said...

yep, it's always wise to pay the bill
well done

Akelamalu said...

Glad you enjoyed it G :)

I think she was trying to pull a fast one Valerie but it backfired.

And on time Dianne!

Mama Zen said...

That's taking bill collection to a whole new level! Very cool, Ake!

Electric Addict said...

:O great short story

secret agent woman said...


The Cello Strings said...

you rock on 55's.

tony said...

So Much for The Customer Is Always Right. !

Jannie Funster said...

Whoa -- you gotta watch those sledge hammers in conservatories.

This had quite the twist, and I loved it!


Linda said...

Oh dear, I hope the bill didn't get lost in the mail and she really DID pay it but Harry didn't get it!

Akelamalu said...

Yes it is a bit extreme Mama Zen!

Cheers Electric Addict :)

Yikes indeed SAW ;)

Why thankyou cello strings, you're very kind. :)

Yep seriously lacking in the customer service department Tony LOL

Glad you enjoyed it Jannie :)

Now there's a twist Linda!

Maggie May said...

Goodness...... what a way to carry on!
Maggie X

Nuts in May

Shrinky said...

Blimey, I'll bet his wife never maxes out his credit cards. Nice one, Ake, I love the twisted way your mind works..!

Akelamalu said...

A bit OTT isn't it Maggie ;)

She wouldn't dare Shrinky! Glad you liked it. x