Harry removed the doors and windows of the conservatory and smiled as he wielded the sledgehammer, demolishing the walls.
Arriving home from work Janice watched open mouthed.
"What do you think you're doing?" screamed Janice.
Harry carried on.
"Stop, stop now please!" pleaded Janice.
"Too late" said Harry grinning smugly,
"you should've paid the bill!"
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23 comments:
oh no! pay the bill fast!!!
smiles, bee
xoxoxoxooxo
oh MY!
Aloha from Waikiki;
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Oh, GREAT one, m'dear!
Never saw that ending coming.
YIKES!
Have a wonderful weekend!
X
I read the first lines and said "Whoa!" right out loud.
Shame on her--she's getting what she paid for. ;)
--snow
Great story!
Oh dear! Sometimes I wish I could set about contractors with a sledgehammer for their lack of service!
those who live in glass houses should not throw stones (or weild sledgehammers)
I always pay my bills on time Bee so this doesn't happen!
I know Cloudia!
Ah got you again eh Ron. x
Yes she is Snow ;)
Thanks Beach x
Yes the same can apply AJ.
Exactly Gleds :)
Boy....Talk about being Strict!
Loved your 55 Ake.
Always Classy, Always creative.
Thanks for playing, And have a Kick Ass Week-End
Hmmm what I want to know is ... why didn't he pay the bill?
yep, it's always wise to pay the bill
well done
Glad you enjoyed it G :)
I think she was trying to pull a fast one Valerie but it backfired.
And on time Dianne!
That's taking bill collection to a whole new level! Very cool, Ake!
:O great short story
Yikes.
wow.
you rock on 55's.
So Much for The Customer Is Always Right. !
Whoa -- you gotta watch those sledge hammers in conservatories.
This had quite the twist, and I loved it!
xo
Oh dear, I hope the bill didn't get lost in the mail and she really DID pay it but Harry didn't get it!
Yes it is a bit extreme Mama Zen!
Cheers Electric Addict :)
Yikes indeed SAW ;)
Why thankyou cello strings, you're very kind. :)
Yep seriously lacking in the customer service department Tony LOL
Glad you enjoyed it Jannie :)
Now there's a twist Linda!
Goodness...... what a way to carry on!
Maggie X
Nuts in May
Blimey, I'll bet his wife never maxes out his credit cards. Nice one, Ake, I love the twisted way your mind works..!
A bit OTT isn't it Maggie ;)
She wouldn't dare Shrinky! Glad you liked it. x
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