Friday, 16 September 2011

Friday 55 Flash Fiction #177 New Doctor..

"The new doctor is wonderful" said Matron

"the patients love him and he's so polite.

“Here he is now” she told the new nurse.

"I know him" said the nurse

"he's only been here a couple of weeks right?”

"That's right, how did you know?" replied Matron.

"He's my neighbour,

and he's not a doctor!"

Friday 55 Flash Fiction is brought to you by G-man (Mr Knowitall). The idea is you write a story in exactly 55 words. If you want to take part pop over and let G-man know when you've posted your 55.


Melanie said...

Ooops! =)

Beach Bum said...

Oh boy!

I can easily imagine things would get very interesting after that.

Valerie said...

The truth will out... somehow.

Brian Miller said...

glad the convo was not over a twist...

gautami tripathy said...

I loved that twisted ending..

stapled maples

Kirstin said...

haha I love these tiny little stories :)

Margaret said...

A couple of weeks! It sounds like a scene from the movie "Catch Me If You Can" with Leonardo DiCaprio which is what the show "White Collar" is based on. (I like both)

Dianne said...

thanks for the giggles

your photo at Ron's place is lovely, the composition is simply stunning

you really should post more of your photography, you're really good

Valerie said...

Your picture on Ron's blog is fantastic.... absolutely loved it.

Daryl said...

Lovely laugh here ..

Ron said...

""He's my neighbour,

and he's not a doctor!"

Bwhahahahahahahahaha! Flawless finish, m'dear!

As always! Thanks for the great morning laugh!

Have a great weekend.....X

Akelamalu said...

I bet that's what he said when he realised he'd been rumbled Melanie LOL

I bet they did Beach!

It will now for sure Valerie LOL

Oh yes, that would have been terrifying Brian!

Thanks Gautami x

Glad you like them Kirstin x

Apparently it has happened Margaret, scary isn't it?

Thanks Diane, glad you like the photo but I'm the one posing on the sunlounger, hubby took the photo! I'll pass on your praise. :)

Hubby took the photo of me on the sunlounger Valerie, I'll pass on your compliment. :)

Happy to make you smile Daryl x

Glad you liked it Ronx

G-Man said...

Reminds me of an old joke punchline,'I'm not a Doctor, but I'll take a look'!
Loved your 55 Pearlie Mae.
You Rock The Empire
Thanks for playing, and have a Kick Ass Week-End

Empress Bee (of the high sea) said...

there is a commercial here that ends with "yes but i stayed at a holiday inn express last night" which makes anything all right!

smiles, bee

Linda said...

But I bet he did stay at a Holiday Inn Express!

Nicely done as alwways, m'dear!

pegbur7 said...

Love the picture from Ron's post and love the fiction!

Akelamalu said...

Love that joke G x


Possibly Linda, thanks.

Why thankyou on both counts pegbur7 :)

Travis Cody said...

Uh oh! Another great twist!

Maggie May said...

Oh dear! Yes, another twist in the tale.
Maggie X

Nuts in May

Mel said...

*laughing* 55 words and you took the cake! Well done!!

And you pose well, dearone. So well that I had to study that photo and decide just what backdrop got used. LOL That must have been some piece of paradise....and himself with the camera--done good!
Oh, you're a brave one, indeed. And he--has implicit taste, no doubt! Thanks for sharing a piece of yourself and that bit of paradise through his eyes. (though I'm sure they're one in the same...)

Valerie said...

stopping in from ron's blog, just waving hello and to say i loved your photo over there. nice work!

Akelamalu said...

Cheers Trav :)

You know I love my twists Maggie ;)

Glad you liked the 55 and the photo Mel. It was paradise, no backdrop. I've passed your comments on the MWM - he said thankyou muchly.

Thankyou Valerie :)

Cloudia said...

ha! (spit take :)

Aloha from Waikiki;

We are crazed moving! Please excuse my absence!

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snowelf said...

Oh no...I love it!

You should so write a screenplay--I bet it would be deliciously fun. Just from the characters you come up with in your 55's creative!


Akelamalu said...

You're forgiven Cloudia. :)

Aw thanks Snow, you're so kind. Mwaaah

silverthoughts2 said...

I don't think I want to know what kind of doctor that guy was posing to be. Hehe!

HermanTurnip said...

Flash fiction at its finest. Fantastic!