"The new doctor is wonderful"
said Matron
"the patients love him and he's so
polite.
“Here he is now” she told the new nurse.
"I know him" said the nurse
"he's only been here a couple of
weeks right?”
"That's right, how did you
know?" replied Matron.
"He's my neighbour,
and he's not a doctor!"
Friday 55 Flash Fiction is brought to you by G-man (Mr Knowitall). The idea is you write a story in exactly 55 words. If you want to take part pop over and let G-man know when you've posted your 55.
27 comments:
Ooops! =)
Oh boy!
I can easily imagine things would get very interesting after that.
The truth will out... somehow.
glad the convo was not over a surgery...fun twist...
I loved that twisted ending..
stapled maples
haha I love these tiny little stories :)
A couple of weeks! It sounds like a scene from the movie "Catch Me If You Can" with Leonardo DiCaprio which is what the show "White Collar" is based on. (I like both)
thanks for the giggles
your photo at Ron's place is lovely, the composition is simply stunning
you really should post more of your photography, you're really good
Your picture on Ron's blog is fantastic.... absolutely loved it.
Lovely laugh here ..
""He's my neighbour,
and he's not a doctor!"
Bwhahahahahahahahaha! Flawless finish, m'dear!
As always! Thanks for the great morning laugh!
Have a great weekend.....X
I bet that's what he said when he realised he'd been rumbled Melanie LOL
I bet they did Beach!
It will now for sure Valerie LOL
Oh yes, that would have been terrifying Brian!
Thanks Gautami x
Glad you like them Kirstin x
Apparently it has happened Margaret, scary isn't it?
Thanks Diane, glad you like the photo but I'm the one posing on the sunlounger, hubby took the photo! I'll pass on your praise. :)
Hubby took the photo of me on the sunlounger Valerie, I'll pass on your compliment. :)
Happy to make you smile Daryl x
Glad you liked it Ronx
Reminds me of an old joke punchline,'I'm not a Doctor, but I'll take a look'!
Loved your 55 Pearlie Mae.
You Rock The Empire
Thanks for playing, and have a Kick Ass Week-End
there is a commercial here that ends with "yes but i stayed at a holiday inn express last night" which makes anything all right!
smiles, bee
xoxoxoxoxo
But I bet he did stay at a Holiday Inn Express!
Nicely done as alwways, m'dear!
Love the picture from Ron's post and love the fiction!
Love that joke G x
LOL Bee
Possibly Linda, thanks.
Why thankyou on both counts pegbur7 :)
Uh oh! Another great twist!
Oh dear! Yes, another twist in the tale.
Maggie X
Nuts in May
*laughing* 55 words and you took the cake! Well done!!
And you pose well, dearone. So well that I had to study that photo and decide just what backdrop got used. LOL That must have been some piece of paradise....and himself with the camera--done good!
Oh, you're a brave one, indeed. And he--has implicit taste, no doubt! Thanks for sharing a piece of yourself and that bit of paradise through his eyes. (though I'm sure they're one in the same...)
stopping in from ron's blog, just waving hello and to say i loved your photo over there. nice work!
Cheers Trav :)
You know I love my twists Maggie ;)
Glad you liked the 55 and the photo Mel. It was paradise, no backdrop. I've passed your comments on the MWM - he said thankyou muchly.
Thankyou Valerie :)
ha! (spit take :)
Aloha from Waikiki;
We are crazed moving! Please excuse my absence!
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Oh no...I love it!
You should so write a screenplay--I bet it would be deliciously fun. Just from the characters you come up with in your 55's alone...so creative!
--snow
You're forgiven Cloudia. :)
Aw thanks Snow, you're so kind. Mwaaah
I don't think I want to know what kind of doctor that guy was posing to be. Hehe!
Flash fiction at its finest. Fantastic!
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