Grandma at Grandma's Goulash provides a picture and a word prompt for this Microfiction Meme and the rules are use the photo as inspiration for a story of 140 characters OR 140 words.
Want more challenge? Use the word of the week in your story. This part is optional.
This week's word is MIRED here's the picture and my offering using the picture and word of the week in 140 characters, including spaces and punctuation.
They were having great fun playing in the leaves.
Little did they know what lurked beneath,
until they became mired in it a few minutes later.
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Chilling!
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LOL!!!
With my luck it would have been dog poo.
Could have been anything... Yuk!
I was thinking there was a snake underneath all those leaves. I sure hope not. Please tell us the answer?
Quicksand!!!!!
I was thinking snakes too.
scares me! ha ha ha
smiles, bee
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Cue the music from JAWS ....
Could be Cloudia ;)
That would be my luck too Beach LOL
Indeed it could Valerie
I'll leave it to your imagination Pam ;)
Maybe G-man
It could be snakes BankerChick
It scares me too Bee LOL
You think there's water under there Daryl?
Leaf it out!
"until they became mired in it a few minutes later."
OMG...that gave me CHILLS!
BRILLIANT one as usual, m'dear!
I don't know HOW you come up with these! You are beyond clever!
Have a great week.....X
I remember doing that as well.as i got older,it was fun just to shuffle my feel in the falling leaves.
Oh ya! Dangerous stuff.
Wonder what's underneath?
This is so much fun!
Oh, clever one!
Oh yeuck! Who's doing the laundry?
Eeeuw! Was it a d.b?
Ooh, scary!
Kay, Alberta, Canada
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Oh now I'm wondering what lies beneath! ^__^
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Yikes! That conjures up everything from doggy doo to quicksand or thick mud. Nice one!
LOL nice pun Dumdad :)
Thankyou Ron, so glad you enjoyed it.
Yes, or scooping them up and throwing them in the air Mike :)
Could be anything under there Lady's Life ;)
Cheers Mama Zen x
Not me AJ! LOL
Who knows Pat LOL
The unknown always is Kay!
Me too Helen LOL
Or something more sinister Lisa!
but what is underneath!?
don't leave it to my imagination because nothing good comes when I'm left on my own ;)
Something springs to mind instantly and it isnt pleasant!
Well it could be anything but if you want me to hazard a guess Dianne I'd say Aliens!
What springs to your mind Flowerpot?
Sounds like a very sticky situation! Nicely done.
Trust something to spoil their fun!
Thanks Grandma :)
Always the case isn't it Cheshire Wife? ;)
Uh-oh. Is this the beginning or a horror movie?
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