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Friday, 5 December 2008

Friday 55 Flash Fiction # 54 HOT!...


HOT!








Lying in the bubbling water was quite pleasant, relaxing.











"Mmmmm, it seems to be getting hotter" she thought.








It was becoming very uncomfortable but her calls brought no response.






She was being boiled alive!









Suddenly she was being lifted out of the water but it was too late.






She was now....









a hard boiled egg!













Friday 55 Flash Fiction is brought to you by G-man (Mr Knowitall). The idea is you write a story in exactly 55 words. If you want to take part pop over and let G-man know when you've posted your 55.

32 comments:

Ron said...

OMG, Akelamalu...this was so FUNNY!

How do you ever think of these?

Clever lady you are!

Have a wonderful Friday, my friend!

Ron said...

P.S. and enjoy your eggs this morning!!

ciara said...

you are too funny, ake! great 55. i still have to come up w a 55. :-/

MarmiteToasty said...

LMFAO........ I thought you were going to say 'lobster'..... to dam funny..

x

Flowerpot said...

Well done Ak. I had boiled egg for breakfast this morning - poor thing!

Emmie said...

ahahaha funny :) I loved it!

buffalodick said...

Gave me an idea for dinner- an omlette!

acey said...

hi, ake! i just love your creative mind. i like this flash 55! poor egg. hahahaha.

G-Man said...

Ake, I prefer a 3 minute egg, but hard boiled is good! And so are you!
Thanks for playing, thanks for visiting,(you did visit didn't you?)Hmmmmm....
Have a Great Week-End...G

Empress Bee (of the High Sea) said...

an egg? ha ha ha

smiles, bee
xxxooxxoxoxoxoxo

Linda said...

Ah, an egg - I was thinking it was going to be a lobster! You are too clever for me!!

Hmmm, think I shall go scramble a couple of eggs now that I think of it!

Real Live Lesbian said...

LMAO!!! You crack me up!

Akelamalu said...

I have a warped mind Ron, or so MWM tells me! Glad you liked it m'dear. x

You'll think of something Ciara! Pleased you enjoyed it. x

I never thought of a lobster Marmie :0

See, you feel guilty now Flowerpot don't you? ;)

Pleased you liked it Emmie x

No way are you just cooking an omellete Buff, there's got to be more to it!

Aw thanks Acey :)

I have to really fancy an egg to be able to eat one G-man, otherwise they make me sick!

Yep, just an egg Bee. ;)

You thought a lobster as well Linda?
Enjoy your scrambled eggs. x


Crack you up RLL that's a pun considering the content! :0

Dianne said...

that was fantastic!!

Anndi said...

You always surprise me with these. LOL

Donnetta Lee said...

I also thought it was going to be a lobster! Well, I'm getting ready to go jump into a boiling hot bathtub. I've got the crud and muscles ache. Ready to be boiled! D

Dr.John said...

That was funny. You are so good at this 55 thing.

tony said...

I spent this evening in a hot tub! The best place to be in this weather!

Rastaman said...

Funny! Thanks for the laugh.

Eel Wind said...

Half boiled egg...

-.-'

sorry but..

-.-"

Catch said...

I was hoping she was being lifted out of the boiling water by a knight in shining armor!!!! LoL

Travis said...

Heheheheheheheeee

Mona said...

LOL! That was a cool 'Hot'! :D

Akelamalu said...

Aw thanks Dianne :)

That's the idea Anndi :)

LOL enjoy your bath Donnetta x

Why thank you Dr. John :0

That's one way to keep warm Tony :)

You're welcome Rastaman, please it brought a smile to you.

Does that mean you liked it Eelwind

She was Catch but he got there too late! :(

Happy to have made you titter Trav :)

Ah cool/hot is good Mona, thankyou. x

Finding Pam said...

What a great story! I did not see that coming until it was too late. Very funny. thanks for your brilliant mind.

storyteller said...

LOL ... your mind works in wondrous ways! Who would have thought you'd take the perspective of an egg? Simply wonderful ... with illustrations too ;--)
Fun to listen to Bing as I type this.
Hugs and blessings,

Akelamalu said...

Ah the surprise ending worked Pam, thankyou. :)

You're very kind Storyteller, thankyou m'dear. So pleased you're enjoying the Christmas music. :)

cheshire wife said...

LOL. You have a wonderful imagination. The ending was totally unexpected!

Akelamalu said...

Oh thankyou Cheshire Wife :)

Lulda Casadaga said...

Too funny...I was worried for a minute...thought it might be the aliens cookin her! :D

Akelamalu said...

LOL it could have been Lulda! ;)

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