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Friday, 29 February 2008

Friday 55 Flash Fiction #16 Message In A Bottle

In honour of Mimi's new Meme......


Message in a Bottle


Carrie picked up the bottle on the beach and read the message.



If you find this please get help.





I am fast running out of food and the natives are getting restless.




Phone this number and tell Jack to come quick.





I’m locked in my mobile burger van and can’t get out for more supplies.



Friday 55 Flash Fiction is brought to you by susiestheboss. If you want to take part pop over and let Susie know when you've posted your 55.



37 comments:

Flowerpot said...

brilliant, AK. Your technology leaves me speechless!

Dianne said...

love it! perfect use of words and photos.

bindhiya said...

Funny!
Wonderful photos to go with..
I know this what I love your place. and your profile picture is beautiful..
love & ((hugs))
bindi

ciara said...

that's cute & funny...you're doing pretty well w the 55s! :)

'JoAnn's-Digital-Eyes'NL said...

hey Akelamalu,
this photo's are also funny and not even from a bad quality!, even sharp though , good for little photo's beside9 or aside? for adds at whatevers little stories, I like the bottle haha , Whats your message? How are you doing?

Have a great weekend
Visit my blog, see my abract Skies.
JoAnn from Holland

Mona said...

hehehe..a mobile van.. who would have thought!

Akelamalu said...

Thanks Flowerpot but what technology? Do you mean the pictures? I found them on google images!

You're very kind Dianne, thank you.

Glad you enjoyed it Bindi thank you. :)

Aw cheers Ciara x

Thanks JoAnn I'll be over shortly. :)

You didn't guess then Mona?

Linda said...

Dang, now I am craving a big ole' juicy burger with all the works!

James Goodman-Horror Writer said...

That was an outstanding 55. Nicely done. :D

Mimi Lenox said...

Lol. That's priceless. You have bottles on the brain I see...and burgers! It looks good. Thanks for honoring my new meme, my friend.
You are awesome and I love ya!

storyteller said...

How fun! I may need to check out this activity ... but then I do Haiku on Fridays so maybe I'll just enjoy yours.
Hugs and blessings,

Pauline said...

Nice one!

la bellina mammina said...

Great one! The title grabbed me, as it was the title of a (sad) movie I love.

p.s ask me some day about the capital punishment here in Singapore - I am for it!

Little Wing said...

Good job!
Mobile burger van, how cool would that be!

Ron said...

What a HOOT Akelamalu!

You're a WIZ at these things!!!

Hey...and I would LOVE to take a BIG bite out of the burger right now. I'm not a huge beef eater, but when I DO...it's always a burger, fries and a coke.

5 Guys Burger's in the US are the BEST! If you ever visit here...I'll take you a MWM out to lunch!

Enjoy your weekend, dear lady!

Skittles said...

What a nice way to combine two things!

Akelamalu said...

Go get one Linda!

Cheers James. :)

You're welcome Mimi xx

You should try 55 fiction Storyteller I think you'd enjoy doing it.

Thanks Pauline x

Glad you enjoyed it Bella. You should do a post about Capital Punishment in Singapore.

Mobile burger vans are commonplace here Little Wing!

You're very kind Ron. If ever MWM and I get to the States I'll be sure to let you know and look forward to enjoying a burger with you. xx

I try Skittles :)

buffalodickdy said...

A clever piece of work! Different from the others, for sure!

Dave said...

Wow What fun this is, Thanks

Diana Joy said...

hahahaha!
That's great!
Thanks sooooo much for stopping by and encouraging me :)
You are a true friend!
I am doing much better and I am getting stronger every day. Now I am just finishing up what God has asked me to do....I guess what I believe is my purpose for being here....I am handing my book over to the publisher on Monday! I am so excited!!!!
Thanks for loving me, caring enough to come by daily, and always asking :)
Love,
Diana Joy

The Rotten Correspondent said...

Why do I feel hungry after reading that??

Akelamalu said...

Why thank you Buffalo :)

Glad you enjoyed it Dave

Oh it's good to see you Diana Joy, I was getting real worried about you honey. x

You need a hamburger Correspondent! :)

Travis said...

Now that's funny!

MarmiteToasty said...

Just smiling, like I do everytime I come over here.....

HAPPY MUVVERS DAY to you dear friend....

x

Akelamalu said...

Happy to make you smile Trave!

Thanks Marmie - Happy Mothers Day to you too! xx

aCey said...

this was funny, akelamalu! :)

Elween said...

ha, yes it's funny but nice. love the pics. :)

Akelamalu said...

Thank you Acey :)

Glad you liked it Elween. What's wrong with your blog I can't get on it?

Maggie May said...

Hi, I have just come across your blog which looks really interesting, so thought I would stop a while & say, "Hello"

Akelamalu said...

Hello Maggie May, nice to meet you. Thanks for taking the time to comment I hope you'll call in again. :)

elena jane said...

wonderful :-)

Odat said...

Good work!!! Made me smile!
Peace

Akelamalu said...

Thank you Elena and Odat xx

S said...

That was most excellent and fun too! SOrry I am late, in fact, I didnt even write my own 55 this week, oops!

THanks for playing 55 with us.

Akelamalu said...

Thanks Susie, I noticed you hadn't done one this week, next week hopefully. :)

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