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Friday, 27 January 2012

Friday 55 Flash Fiction #187 The Best..



They are all clamouring for me, wanting the best that money can buy - that's me.

I can't remember how I got into it,

It is a lucrative business that keeps me in luxury.

My prices are high, but they are getting the best.

All the stables want their prize mares to breed with The Stallion.



Friday 55 Flash Fiction is brought to you by G-man (Mr Knowitall). The idea is you write a story in exactly 55 words. If you want to take part pop over and let G-man know when you've posted your 55.

23 comments:

Melanie said...

well done!!

A Daft Scots Lass said...

I'm taking part too, today.

MorningAJ said...

I like that!

Valerie said...

Very good, although my mind was going down the wrong track...grins.

Beach Bum said...

Great writing!

Akelamalu said...

Cheers Melanie :)

Oh good Scot's Lass

Glad you like it AJ

Whatever were you thinking Valerie? ;)

thanks Beach x

Brian Miller said...

he sure has a hard job...

lol.

yeah you had me wondering there for a moment...smiles.

Margaret said...

The life of a stallion!

cheshire wife said...

It's a hard life!

Linda said...

That's just got to be every stallion's dream job, huh?

Have a great weekend, m'dear!

Banker Chick said...

This is a good one.What a business.

anthonynorth said...

An enjoyable stud-y.

Ron said...

BRAVA!

As always, you forever impress me with your cleverness and gift with words!

LOVE the ending!

Have a super weekend, m'dear!

X

Akelamalu said...

Yep it's a hard job but one that has to be done Brian. The twist had you fooled eh?

Yes indeed Margaret ;)

Yes gotta feel sorry for him Cheshire Wife LOL

Of course it is Lindda lol Thanks, same to you honey. x

Thanks BankerChick :)

Nice play on the word Anthony ;)

Cheers Ron, glad you enjoyed it. x

Deb said...

Loved the unexpected turn at the end ! Thought I knew where we were going and then, zip, you surprised me! You are one clever, creative writer. Someday I might just give Flash Fiction a try. It might help me be less wordy ! Happy weekend.

Steve Isaak said...

Interesting, different read (in a good way). =)

G-Man said...

What a horribly BORING life that would be..Mounting and eating, Mounting and eating...All the while wishing he was a Polo Pony!
Poor Thing.
Loved your Equine 55 Ake
Thanks for playing, and have a Kick Ass Week-End

Akelamalu said...

So pleased you enjoyed it and the twist worked Deb. Yes, do try it I think you'd realy enjoy writing 55s. x

Thanks Steve :)

Oh yes that would be a boring life, wouldn't it G-man? LOL

Mama Zen said...

Excellent, Ake!

Shrinky said...

Ha, I love how you always have a surprise punch at the end - excellent stuff, me dear!

Akelamalu said...

Thanks Mama Zen :)

I try my best Shrinky, glad you like them. :)

Secret Agent Woman said...

Don't you wonder if they even much care?

Julia Phillips Smith said...

I can't remember how I got into it

LOL! Lucky him.