She grabbed the end and tugged.
It's stuck, she thought, she tugged again.
It didn't budge.
If I clear some of this other stuff it may come free.
She tried again.
It was no use.
"Ah that's the reason" she said
as she glared at the woman holding the other end of the sale dress.
Friday 55 Flash Fiction is brought to you by G-man (Mr Knowitall). The idea is you write a story in exactly 55 words. If you want to take part pop over and let G-man know when you've posted your 55.
27 comments:
I HATE when that happens!
She should've packed her pepper spray..
Maybe it's not so great after all if SHE thinks it's good. ;)
Nice 55.
oh and now this is about to get on....bing bing bing round one....
LOL .. been there, done that .. honest!
Me too Mel ;)
That's an idea Shrinky!!
Ah you have a point there AJ lol
Yep it could turn into a boxing match Brian LOL
LOL I can imagine Daryl
Ah, slightly more violent than war, I find ;-)
She should put it back, it will be worthless after all that tugging :O)
So THAT's the reason I don't like shopping! I'm too short to hold on for very long.
Happy new year to you!
"Ah that's the reason" she said
as she glared at the woman holding the other end of the sale dress."
HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA! BRILLIANT ending!
You always have wondering where you're going with these Flash Fictions, and then POW me in the end with a STELLAR finish!
BRAVA, m'dear!
Have a wonderful weekend....X
Hmmmm...
Two hot chicks 'Tugging' on the same object?
Thats kinda sexy Pearlie Mae.
Loved your 55
Thanks for playing, and have a Kick Ass Week-End
I personally never get between two ladies shopping, its too dangerous.
I think you may be right there Anthony LOL
It could be a bit grubby Valerie :(
I like shopping but I never go to the sales Hope too much like hard work. LOL
You know I like a little twist at the end Ron, glad you enjoy them. :)
G-man Trust you! LOL
Definitely Beach :0
I smacked the butterfly and knocked my coffee over.
Just kidding.
I thought this was going to be sinister but then had to smile. Don't you just hate it when you end up eying the same garment on the sales rack?
Have a great weekend!!
Yup...my mind went into the gutter initially. Cute. Loved the twist. :)
Ah glad to hear you enjoyed the twist b>Yvonn>Raven, what on earth were you thinking? LOL
And after all of that it probably wasn't her size!
The funny thing is that this has happened to so many of us...it probably isn't fiction ! You pulled me in and held me in suspense right up to the ending ! Happy weekend !
I really laughed at this, had a similar thing happen, but I had passed it up then went back and some one else was holding it. I hovered then swooped when she put it back. It fit.
This is where someone needs to step in with the King Solomon attitude and offer to split the dress in half!
You always make me laugh!
oh good one!
smiles, bee
xoxooxoxox
Yes you're probably right Cheshire Wife LOL
Glad you enjoyed it Deb and I'm sure you're right about it happening often.
Hovering is good Bankerchick, they usually put it down at some point. ;)
Oh but it would be no use to anyone then Linda!
Well I'm always happy if you're happy Mama Zen :)
Thanks Bee x
Better to have a ripped half than nothing at all!
Maggie X
Nuts in May
Ha! I like this.
Hi there,
first time here, and I enjoyed reading the flash fiction.
Simple,realistic and a nice twist.
Cheers GB
Oh no Maggie a ripped half is no good!
Glad you enjoyed it Japolina
Welcome Gyanban, I'm pleased you liked the twist.
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