She pulled up at the lights and felt the jolt as the car behind touched her bumper.
Getting out of the car she went to survey the damage.
Looking at the driver she beckoned him to take a look,
then stared in amazement as he drove in pursuit of her BMW...
as it was highjacked!
Friday 55 Flash Fiction is brought to you by G-man (Mr Knowitall). The idea is you write a story in exactly 55 words. If you want to take part pop over and let G-man know when you've posted your 55.
28 comments:
awesome 55!!!
Please tell me that's not a true story!
I've gone for a car tale this week too. Must be something in the air!
Enjoyed that. Great twist.
yikes...it was all a set up eh?
Were you visiting the States Ake?
Hahahahaha...
Loved your 55
Thanks for playing, and have a Kick Ass Week-End
Thanks Scots Lass :)
Something very similar happened here a while back AJ. Strange how some of us choose a similar theme isn't it?
Glad you enjoyed it Anthony :)
Indeed it was Brian ;)
Some days it just does not pay to get out of bed.
Exactly why I want to get my consealed handgun liscense. This sort of crime happens all the time where I go to shop for my groceries. I choose my time wisely when I go.
A really great 55.
You're endings ALWAYS blow me away!
I don't know how you come up with these each week.
Brilliant Flash 55!
BRA-VA!
Have a wonderful weekend, m' dear!
X
Geez, you just never know these days. THANK YOU for this, I'll be on the lookout for that kind of peep.
xoxo
LOL no G-man, it happens here too!
You're so right there Beach Bum!
I don't think even the thought of something like that happening would induce me to carry a gun, even if it was legal here Pam!
I'm so pleased you enjoy them Ron x
It could happen anywhere Jannie. :0
the old bump and grab
happens here all the time
every now and then the news will remind people not to fall for it
good tale lady
have a lovely weekend
Hope sends hugs :)
a tight fight?
intense 55, well done,
And it happens exactly that fast!
Oh, no!
Always written with a twist! Awesome Pearl.
Glad you enjoyed it Dianne
Thanks Jingle x
I believe it does Quilly
Oh yes Mama Zen :(
Ooops indeed SAW
Aw thanks Denise xx
I think you've got the Flash 55 down to a science. Well done!
Bastards!
"Life is never in vain if people remember you"... that's very interesting. I think on that whenever I see it
...and THAT'S a bad day :)
Why thankyou Aims x
Yes they are Trav!
It's true Gleds
Oh yes it is a very bad day SDBS.
The cad!!!!!
Maggie X
Nuts in May
Cads and thieves Maggie!
Very nice....quick, and like one of your other commentors says...you do seem to have this Flash 55 down pat....well done!
very well done! Superb
Thanks RN :)
Cheers Dave :)
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