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Friday, 4 March 2011

Friday 55 Flash Fiction #154 Accident....


She pulled up at the lights and felt the jolt as the car behind touched her bumper.


Getting out of the car she went to survey the damage.


Looking at the driver she beckoned him to take a look,


then stared in amazement as he drove in pursuit of her BMW...


as it was highjacked!





Friday 55 Flash Fiction is brought to you by G-man (Mr Knowitall). The idea is you write a story in exactly 55 words. If you want to take part pop over and let G-man know when you've posted your 55.

29 comments:

A Daft Scots Lass said...

awesome 55!!!

MorningAJ said...

Please tell me that's not a true story!

I've gone for a car tale this week too. Must be something in the air!

anthonynorth said...

Enjoyed that. Great twist.

Brian Miller said...

yikes...it was all a set up eh?

G-Man said...

Were you visiting the States Ake?
Hahahahaha...
Loved your 55
Thanks for playing, and have a Kick Ass Week-End

Akelamalu said...

Thanks Scots Lass :)

Something very similar happened here a while back AJ. Strange how some of us choose a similar theme isn't it?

Glad you enjoyed it Anthony :)

Indeed it was Brian ;)

Beach Bum said...

Some days it just does not pay to get out of bed.

Finding Pam said...

Exactly why I want to get my consealed handgun liscense. This sort of crime happens all the time where I go to shop for my groceries. I choose my time wisely when I go.

A really great 55.

Ron said...

You're endings ALWAYS blow me away!

I don't know how you come up with these each week.

Brilliant Flash 55!

BRA-VA!

Have a wonderful weekend, m' dear!

X

Jannie Funster said...

Geez, you just never know these days. THANK YOU for this, I'll be on the lookout for that kind of peep.

xoxo

Akelamalu said...

LOL no G-man, it happens here too!

You're so right there Beach Bum!

I don't think even the thought of something like that happening would induce me to carry a gun, even if it was legal here Pam!


I'm so pleased you enjoy them Ron x

Akelamalu said...

It could happen anywhere Jannie. :0

Dianne said...

the old bump and grab
happens here all the time
every now and then the news will remind people not to fall for it

good tale lady
have a lovely weekend

Hope sends hugs :)

Jingle said...

a tight fight?

intense 55, well done,

Quilly said...

And it happens exactly that fast!

Mama Zen said...

Oh, no!

secret agent woman said...

Oops.

mrsnesbitt said...

Always written with a twist! Awesome Pearl.

Akelamalu said...

Glad you enjoyed it Dianne

Thanks Jingle x

I believe it does Quilly

Oh yes Mama Zen :(

Ooops indeed SAW

Aw thanks Denise xx

aims said...

I think you've got the Flash 55 down to a science. Well done!

Travis Cody said...

Bastards!

Gledwood said...

"Life is never in vain if people remember you"... that's very interesting. I think on that whenever I see it

Sex, Drugs and Bacon Sandwiches said...

...and THAT'S a bad day :)

Akelamalu said...

Why thankyou Aims x

Yes they are Trav!

It's true Gleds

Oh yes it is a very bad day SDBS.

Maggie May said...

The cad!!!!!
Maggie X

Nuts in May

Akelamalu said...

Cads and thieves Maggie!

Smalltown RN said...

Very nice....quick, and like one of your other commentors says...you do seem to have this Flash 55 down pat....well done!

Dave said...

very well done! Superb

Akelamalu said...

Thanks RN :)

Cheers Dave :)