Friday, 31 December 2010

Friday 55 Flash Fiction #146 Regrets......

Dan watched Angie sleeping.

Tracing his finger over her lips he kissed her tenderly.

Dan deeply regretted the affair with Tricia, it had been a terrible mistake.

Now he was truly thankful to whoever had taken the photograph that ended it.

He really loved his wife,

he just hoped she’d never find out about Tanya.

This is a continuation of my last two Flash 55s #145 here and #144 here.

Friday 55 Flash Fiction is brought to you by G-man (Mr Knowitall). The idea is you write a story in exactly 55 words. If you want to take part pop over and let G-man know when you've posted your 55.


Quilly said...

You know, these folks all need a little super glue on their zippers!

Grandpa said...

Oh dear, when will they ever learn!

And I have a little regret of my own...

Beach Bum aka Captain Barbossa said...

Now that was a twist with a serious punch!

anthonynorth said...

Nice twist to this - some people, eh ;-)

Valerie said...

Now that's what I call living dangerously...

Akelamalu said...

You got it Quilly!

No they don't Grandpa. I hope your regret can be put right. x

Indeed it was Beach Bum

Thanks Anthony

He does seem to doesn't he Valerie?

Cheryl said...

Will she or won't she? My gut says she will.

Mine's up.

Empress Bee (of the High Sea) said...

happy new year honey! thanks for all the visits this past year and hope next year will be the same...

hugs, bee

Dumdad said...

Dan's a lad!

And a Happy New Year to you!

Eric Alder said...

Oh snap! I wasn't expecting THAT!

Teriffic 55, Akelamalu!

Ron said...


LOVED that ending!!!!


You ALWAYS get me!!!!

Brava, once again!

Happy New Year, m'dear! Thank you for being such a loyal and longstanding blogging friend. I look forward to another year!

X to you and MWM!

MorningAJ said...

Great ending!
Happy new year. Have a wonderful 2011!

tony said...

Have A Really Great New Year! Bestest Wishes From Tony.

Brian Miller said...

ha. little late for that...but what he does not know...

happy new year!

Mama Zen said...

What a dog!

Cloudia said...

dear DEAR Ake!

Wishing YOU Aloha from Hawaii

Comfort Spiral


G-Man said...

We can only hope...
Pearlie Mae, you are a shining star in a very dreary world.
Have a Kick Ass 2011

Jingle said...

too many regrets like this,well expressed story,
love your plot, beautiful 55.

happy 2011.

A Lady's Life said...

Tanya is otherwise known as a Russian Princess so she might also not want this to be known.

A Lady's Life said...


Travis Cody said...

A naughty man indeed.

Now I suspect that it's already 2011 to you, so have a happy!

Maggie May said...

I expect by now he is onto Theresa!
Have a Happy New Year.
Maggie X

Nuts in May

secret agent woman said...

Karma has a way of evening these things out.

Happy New Year!

cheshire wife said...

Three is a crowd or should that be four?

A Happy New Year to you.

Linda said...

I love the way that you've turned this story into a Flash Fiction Feature!

Shrinky said...

Haaaaaaaaaaaaa, oh you've truly excelled yourself on this one - wonderful!

Akelamalu said...

I'm sure she will Cheryl ;)

Happy New Year to you too Bee x

Dan's a bad lad Dumdad!

Thanks Eric!

I'm looking forward to spending another year with you too Ron! Glad you enjoyed it hon. x

Thanks AJ, Happy New Year to you too. x

Cheers Tony and the same to you. :)

He'll find out soon enough Brian!

Yes he is Mama Zen!

Hi Cloudia x

Why thankyou G-manxx

I'm so pleased you enjoyed it Jingle :)

I'm sure Tanya doesn't want to be found out either Lady's Life!

He is indeed Trav. Happy New Year to you m'dear.

You could be right Maggie ;)

It does indeed SAW!

I think even Dan's lost count Cheshire Wife!

I'm so pleased you like it Linda x

Aw thanks Shrinky glad you lik it honey. x

Anonymous said...

LOL...that's perfect and now I know where they came up with the saying grease monkey LOL Happy New Year to you :)

Akelamalu said...

LOL I think your comment was meant for the next post Thom ;)