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Monday, 27 December 2010

Microfiction Monday #34


Susan at Stony River hosts this fun theme each Monday, so do pop over and read the others who have

signed Mr. Linky. The rules are thus:


Every Monday Susan will post a picture for the subject of your story. Microfiction means the shortest of short stories. Think Aesop's fables, comic strips, or even jokes: complete stories that can be told in under a minute. For this game, the limit is a tweetable 140 characters or fewer, including punctuation and spa


Here's today's picture and my contribution.


Hi, you new to these parts?


 
Yeah, I just dropped in on my way home from the south coast. I’m a racing pigeon.


 
How exciting, what’s your racing name?


 
Shytalk, what’s yours?



140 characters including punctuation and spaces

24 comments:

Beach Bum aka Captain Barbossa said...

Great story. Some think I'm crazy but I actually like pigeons. Sitting with my daughter in the park one time and I noticed the pigeons were looking at all the people like we do animals in a zoo.

Always Write said...

Ha something pigeons aren't by nature - shy

I'm new and over at Always Write

Valerie said...

The amount of thieving (food) our pigeons do I'm surprised it wasn't named Shylock.

Sometimes Saintly Nick said...

I grew up around my uncle's racing pigeons.

Lisa Ricard Claro said...

Nice way to see the pic. I like the pigeon's name; great word choice. Nice MFM.

cheshire wife said...

I hope that he made it home.

A belated Happy Christmas to you!

Madeleine said...

Nice one! :O)

Empress Bee (of the High Sea) said...

hope he wins the race! ha ha

smiles, bee
xoxoxoxoxoxo

hope said...

I never would've thought of racing pigeons! Good one!

Peggy said...

Racing birds, I love it!

Finding Pam said...

What a great story! You say so much in so few words. Now that is talent.

Bill ~ {The Old Fart} said...

He doesn't seem that shy at all. Can he afford to stop and take a rest if he is racing. Wishing you a wonderful 2011.

Ron said...

You are soooooooooooo clever!!!!

"Shytalk"

LOVE IT!!!!!!

I laughed so hard at Valerie's comment...

"The amount of thieving (food) our pigeons do I'm surprised it wasn't named Shylock."

HA! I agree, the pigeons here are the same!

Great one as usual, m'dear!

Happy Monday....X

Cheryl said...

Awwww, what a sweet MM.

Dianne said...

shytalk is an excellent handle as a truck driver would say :)

Maria@BubblegumandDuctTape said...

hahaha, shytalk, that's funny. Good one!

Quilly said...

I immediately thought "Shylock", and I see I wasn't the first. The pigeons I am used to aren't the shy type!

G-Man said...

Ake....
I Loved it!
Hoping you have a very Happy New Year....Galen

Linda said...

Very clever as always, m'dear!

mrsnesbitt said...

Pear - another Pearler! lol!

Akelamalu said...

I've noticed pigeons doing that too Beach Bum!

That's true Always Write!

You're right Valerie LOL

My brother kept racing pigeons too Nick

Ah you got the name Lisa! :)

I'm sure he did Cheshire Wife

Thanks Madeleine x

I think he will Bee

Cheers Hope

Glad you enjoyed it Peggy

Why thankyou Pam x

He can afford the rest, he's a champ Bill

Ah you got the name too Ron! I was beginning to think no-one shared my sense of humour. ;)

Thanks Cheryl

Definitely a good name for a pigeon Dianne ;)

Great you got the name too Maria ;)

Not many pigeons are shy Quilly but they are all ShiteHawks - hence the quip!

Glad you enjoyed it Gx

Cheers Linda x

Thanks Denise - you got it then?

Suz said...

ha ha

Dumdad said...

Good one again.

Akelamalu said...

Happy to make you smile Suz :)

Cheers Dumdad x