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Friday 28 November 2008

Friday 55 Flash Fiction # 53 Secret Admirer...

Secret Admirer

A bouquet arrived, the third in as many weeks.



"You must have a secret admirer" commented Steve "lucky I'm not the jealous type."



Lynn didn't know who'd sent them, but was secretly chuffed.
"I'm back" said Mum " I won a competition.....



flowers every week for a year, I gave them your address, have they arrived?"



 
Friday 55 Flash Fiction is brought to you by G-man (Mr Knowitall). The idea is you write a story in exactly 55 words. If you want to take part pop over and let G-man know when you've posted your 55.

21 comments:

Pam said...

hehe my husband would be jealous lol but my goodness what a twist. did she feel a little deflated? :)

p.s. i'm up, too.

Marshall Family said...

ahahaha how great is that :o)

tony said...

But Was Mum Telling The Truth.??!!! :)

Julia Phillips Smith said...

LOL at Tony's comment!

G-Man said...

Whats wrong with Mum's address?
Anyway, thats your story and your stickin to it!
Excellent 55 Ake...Have a Great Week-End..Galen

Rastaman said...

Love it!! Nice way to start my day. Thank you.

snowelf said...

Hahaha! Poor daughter!
Flowers every week would be something nice to look forward to though! :)

--snow

buffalodick said...

As winter comes upon us, cut flowers sure can brighten a room...

Linda said...

D'oh! What a let-down!

I gues it's a good thing that Steve wasn't the jealous type, though, as that might have caused quite the row!

Have a great Friday, Akelamalu!

Mona said...

Was Mum serious or was she protecting her daughter?;)

Akelamalu said...

MWM would want to know where they came from too Ciara. I'm sure Lynn was devastated!

Glad you liked it Emmie :)

Of course Tony, Mum's always tell the truth! ;)

It made me laugh too Julia:)

Well Mum was away on holiday when she won G-man!


Thanks, pleased you enjoyed it Rastaman :)


I would just love flowers every week Snowelf, I wouldn't care where they came from! ;)


They certainly can Buff :)


Yes it could have caused a problem Linda


You decide Mona. ((wink))

lime said...

lol, fun 55, akelamelu. i say if they don't send you flowers buy them for yourself....but a contest prize works too.

Cloudia said...

Ake, Dear:
You have such skill! I babble and occasionally something poetic comes out. YOU submit to discipline and produce little gems. Oy! They like you, the LIKE YOU! (me too ;-) Aloha-

Suburbia said...

Great story, I could never do it in just 55 words!

Julia Phillips Smith said...

I've posted my Bookworm meme.

Ron said...

Ya know, as I was reading the comments, Mona had a GOOD point!

WAS Mum protecting her daughter????

I never thought of that!?!

um...ok, I say she WAS!

HAHAHAHAHA!

Aren't I wicked?

Thanks for another great Flash 55!

Enjoy your weekend, dear lady!

Donnetta said...

I LOVE flowers. Tell mum just to forward some of them MY way. Hubby won't mind a bit! (My 55 is up, too. Barely made it on time.) D

storyteller said...

Weekly flowers for a year! Nice daughter to share with 'mum' this way ;--)
Hugs and blessings,

Akelamalu said...

I buy myself flowers regularly Mona but I'd love to win a regular supply!

Aw thankyou Cloudia xx


It's easier than you think Suburbia :)

OK Julia

Maybe she did Ron ;)

LOL of course I will Donnetta :)

Yes Mum was kind sharing her good fortune Storyteller :)

Cha Cha said...

Oooooooooh, I feel sorry for Lynn!

I was so excited for her.

Secret Admirers are fun.

Especially when they send you flowers.

Not that I've had one, I'm just sayin'.

=P

Akelamalu said...

Flowers from a secret admirer would be fun wouldn't it Strumpet? LOL