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Friday, 14 November 2008

Friday 55 Flash Fiction # 51 The Boss Is Coming To Dinner.....

The Boss Is Coming To Dinner

Nadine had everything under control.

She'd tested the menu the previous week.

Bought only the best ingredients, fine wine,


exquisite tableware and linen, couture dress.

She was nervous about entertaining Dominic's boss and his wife.
She needed to make a good impression; Dominic's promotion depended on it.



"Rinner's Deady" she called, clutching her empty wineglass.



Friday 55 Flash Fiction is brought to you by G-man (Mr Knowitall). The idea is you write a story in exactly 55 words. If you want to take part pop over and let G-man know when you've posted your 55.

28 comments:

Catch said...

lol rinners deady! thats a good one, made me laugh aloud!

MarmiteToasty said...

HAHAHahaha brilliant...

x

Emmie said...

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Mona said...

LOL! That is so funny! :D I can imagine the look at everyone's face!

It usually happens when you are all TOO careful & anxious!

cheshire wife said...

LOL! Dutch courage or double Dutch?

Elaine said...

This had me laughing my head off!

Liquid said...

I am screaming, laughing at this 55!
AWESOME!

Have a Dreat Gay!
lol

:)-

buffalodick said...

Plans are great, but execution of plan is even more important!

Empress Bee (of the High Sea) said...

oops! better luck next time with the dinner! ha ha

smiles, bee
xoxoxoxoxoxoxoxo

G-Man said...

It's hard to shmooze, with too much booze!!
Excellent 55 Ake!!
Thanks for visiting, thanks for playing, and have a Wonderful Week-End...G

ann said...

fery vunny :>)

Real Live Lesbian said...

Another great one! This one had me cracking up!

Dumdad said...

Excellent! Rinner's Deady - I must remember to say that one night....

Daryl said...

Fabulous 'coda'

:-Daryl

citizen of the world said...

Hmm - wonder if he'll get the promotion?

Mojo said...

Maybe she shoulda let that wine breathe a little longer, eh?

nice twist!

storyteller said...

I’ve had no wine, but this is 'Feally Runny' ;--)
Hugs and blessings,

Dr.John said...

Great story and in just fifty five words. Well done.

Ron said...

THAT WAS BRILLIANT!!!!

I LAUGHED my ARSE off!!!

Only you, my dear....

...only YOU!!

Thanks for the wonderful LAUGH!

OMG...I just LOVE these things!

Have a GREAT weekend, Akelamalu!

Lulda Casadaga said...

funny 55...now I'll be laughing as I drive home from work...but I have to stop somewhere first for some wine! :D Enjoy the weekend...

Akelamalu said...

I'm happy to have made you laugh Catch x

Thanks Marmie x

Ooooh thankyou Emmie, I'll be over later. :)

Nerves got the got the better of her Mona!

Too much Dutch courage methinks Cheshire Wife! :)

:) that good Laney :)

Why thanks Liquid, I'm pleased you liked it. :)

Quite Buff!

I don't think there'll be a next time Bee, she's blown it!
:(

Booze and shmooze don't go together, do they G-man?

Glad you enjoyed it Ann x


Aw thanks RLL x


It's a good line to break the ice Dumdad :)


Cheers Daryl :)


Maybe, if no-one noticed Citizen ;)


Possibly Mojo :)


LOL Feally runny Storyteller!


Thankyou Dr. John, how kind. x


You're always too kind to me Ron m'dear. xx


Don't drink too much Lulda you don't want to be mixing up your words now do you? ;)

Linda said...

Perfect! Right up until it wasn't!

Travis said...

Ooops! Sounds like she let the pressure get to her!

smarmoofus said...

hhahahhahaha! Lovely, Akelamalu! That is hilarious! But at least she was too relaxed to be nervous. *smirk*

-smarmoofus

Akelamalu said...

Quite Linda :)

Pressure and nerves Trav!

Relaxed as a newt Smarmoofus :0

Kaknu said...

hahaha - Now that's cooking with wine. ;-)

Akelamalu said...

LOL it sure is Kaku!

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