Air, I need Air
"I need fresh air" he gasped "but I'll have to be careful, they'll be watching for us to come out of the tunnels."
He inched his head through the opening, trying to be inconspicuous but
They spotted him.
Next thing the worm knew he was the rope in a tug of war between two ducks!
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26 comments:
what cute little ducklings!
Ake, you have this little morbid streak in you sometimes...I LOVE IT!
Thanks for visiting, thanks for playing, and have a Great Week-End!
I guess that worm won't be needing air again, will he?!?
ouch...its painful to even think of....
Aren't they Flowerpot?
Mmmm I do G-man, I'm glad you like it. ;)
No he won't Linda :(
Pulled apart, yes painful Catch :0
well i guess he got a lot of air after they tore him open lol cute 55, funny, too
Lol! a worm! That is such a cute 55ve & I love your worms eye view here! :D
In three lines, you still did a twisty ending.
bye bye little worm i hope you got to breathe some fresh air before you were ripped in two.
That was a cute little story.
Thank You
Worms eye view, eh?
You are delighful, Ake!
I thought this piece would become a holocaust escape tear-jerker based on your recent visit to hell. But you instinctively knew that we all need a break just now - and provided it wonderfully,
Aloha my friend ;-)
TOO FUNNY!!! I loved it...I wanted to tell you to see the commercial go to
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=FLPNhsjsC2M
Just cut and paste it in and if it doesn't work (it should)check Dog Frames Cat
hugs
Sandi
Clever woman! You have such a way with words
:-Daryl
hahaha!
Always a twist... love itx
Yay, another fabulous one. :D
Didn't see that one coming! Good stuff when you can suprise me!
Ah, I was ready to grab the tissue, but ended up laughing... That's a Good one!
You know there was a movie made in Poland in the '60's B&W and I think it was called the "Tunnel"...about a few people in WWII looking to escape but get trapped. Check it out sometime...enjoy the weekend! :)
You do so well with these fifty five word things. I love the illustrations as well.
So much for timing.
Loved the gotcha at the end.
BRAVA Akelamalu!!!!
You ALWAYS get me on these and this one ESPECIALLY!!
VERY clever....VERY clever!
applause...applause...applause
Enjoy your weekend, dear lady!
Hey....it SNOWED here today!!!
Just when you had me expecting something HG Wellsian, your Moorlock turns out to be a worm?
Clever girl.
That is what happens when two early birds get the worm.
HA! Always with the twist!
Yep, more air than he needed Ciara!
Glad you enjoyed it Mona :)
I tried Julia! :)
I feel sorry for the little worm Dave :(
I'm all written out about the holocaust Cloudia :( Glad you enjoyed it.
Oh thanks Sandi, I'll take a look. :)
Cheers Daryl x
Pleased you liked it Topchamp :)
Thanks Jo x
Ah I got you Buff :0
I'll check out that film Lulda, thanks. Glad you enjoyed the 55.
Aw you're very kind Dr. John :)
Cheers Jeff x
You had snow Ron? I hope we don't get any, you know I don't liek the cold. So pleased you enjoyed this week's 55. x
Thanks Mojo :)
Yeah I know Nick :(
Precisely Cheshire Wife :)
I try Trav, I try. :)
I was thinking was Nick said!
Oh … the poor worm!!! I do enjoy your visuals as much as your ‘kewl’ stories. Sorry to be late in visiting. Life’s been crazy but I’m doing what I can to catch up today.
Hugs and blessings,
LOL ouch indeed Mimi ;)
Hey no worries Storyteller it's always a pleasure to see you, late or not. :)
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