Grandma at Grandma's Goulash provides a picture and a word prompt for this Microfiction Meme and the rules are use the photo as inspiration for a story of 140 characters OR 140 words.
Want more challenge? Use the word of the week in your story. This part is optional.
This week's word is HONEST here's the picture and my offering using the picture and word of the week in 140 characters, including spaces and punctuation.
The pretty house appeared to belong to loving person,
but James knew different,Annabel wasn't honest,
the only person she loved was herself.
30 comments:
Whoa! Now that could be a novel.
Great work!
Ouch! Don't we all know one of those!
Neatly put.
There are a few around. Good one, Pearl. I agree with Beach Bum, you could write more on this theme.
but i love her shutters!
smiles, bee
xxooxoxoxox
Oooooh! Knife inserted and given a twist for good measure. I think we have all known an Annabel or two. Good one!
Thanks Beach x
Yes we do AJ
Why thankyou Valerie :)
I like all her decorations Bee ;)
You're right Polly.
There's no picture! But typing ANYTHING that makes sense in precisely 140 characters is genuis. Way smarter than I ever could be ha har!
Ah, sadly so often the case.
Oo! Oo! Oo! This sounds like a super-inviting intro to a romantically-charged, Valentine's Day-y "Who Done IT?"! I love a good murder mystery!
James is very smart .. he wasnt fooled by those heart shutters .. I bet his heart shuddered when he learned she was so self involved ..
OMG...that twist at the end was STELLAR!
BRAVA and three CHEERS!
I love the photo too.
Have a wonderful Monday, m'dear!
X
Well done. Lots of emotion in this one, and the hint of a deeper story below the surface.
That would make a great opening for a short story!
Appearances, even of home decor, can sure be deceiving! Great SY!
Oh sorry you can't see the picture Gleds, thanks.
Unfortunately Anthony
Mmmmm I can see where you're coming from SparkleFarkle
James isn't easily fooled Daryl ;)
Thanks muchly Ron x
Thankyou Lisa
I guess it could be expanded Mama Zen
Indeed they can Pat ;)
Appearances can be deceiving.
Jim's thoughts seemed to hold a bit of a chill. This is a complete microfiction, but I agree that this has the potential for a much longer story. Nice work.
Looks can be deceiving, eh?
A common malady!
Warm Aloha from Waikiki, Sistah
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That's hard love when the one you love only loves herself/himself.
Nice micro-fiction revelation. :)
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Yes I can think of a few!!
that Annabel puts up a good facade
Indeed they can Cheshire Wife
Thanks Grandama :)
Yes they can Trav
Indeed Cloudia
You're right there Jim
Me too Flowerpot
Indeed she does Dianne
This was very complete, I don't like Anabelle bu I like her decor style.
woooo! Now that caught my eye. lol Great beginning to a book here.:)
Happy Valentines Day to you :)
Too bad Annabel turned out like that.
Her home was lovely!
Maggie X
Nuts in May
Oh, yes, too many of those people around.
Well done.
K
I like her decor style too but she's a bitch Bankerchick ;)
Thanks Lady;sLife, Happy Valentine's Day to you too.
She deceived us all, just goes to prove you can't judge a book by it's cover Maggie!
ThanksKay :)
Yeah, she's trying too hard.
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