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Friday, 10 February 2012

Friday 55 Flash Fiction #189 Daily Walk...


 Penny loved her daily walk by the river.

The walks were usually peaceful and uneventful, not today.

Hearing the word "Fetch" she looked around to see a woman floundering in the water.

Without hesitation she plunged straight into the water and dragged the woman to safety.

Penny made the headlines...........

Dog Saves Woman From Drowning.

Friday 55 Flash Fiction is brought to you by G-man (Mr Knowitall). The idea is you write a story in exactly 55 words. If you want to take part pop over and let G-man know when you've posted your 55.

25 comments:

Beach Bum said...

Great story!

I somehow pictured Penny slightly upset that her walk was disturbed even though she saved someone's life.

Never saved anyone's life but I have had those rare peaceful and quiet moments disturbed.

Excellent writing!

Valerie said...

Very good, Pearl. I hope Penny got a medal for her action.

Brian Miller said...

yay penny! rescue dogs are cool....

Margaret said...

Ha. "Fetch" might work with my dog... he loves that game and I have NEVER seen him quite playing... he is always ready for more. Cute.

Daryl Edelstein said...

If not a medal at least a biscuit .. you clever woman ..

Mama Zen said...

Excellent 55!

Crystal Jigsaw said...

Very good! We've had a few stories of men jumping in rivers recently, saving dogs from drowning!

CJ x

A Lady's Life said...

Good dog Penny.Nice flash fiction.:)

anthonynorth said...

Now that's a good dog.

Ron said...

"Penny made the headlines...........

Dog Saves Woman From Drowning."

HAHAHAHAHHAAHAHAHHAAHAHA!

OMG, your twists are ALWAYS so cleverly BRILLIANT, m'dear!

BRA-VA!

Have a wonderful weekend!

X

rambling-on-about-life-and-this-and-that said...

A cracker!

Ellie Garratt said...

Oh, I liked! Did not see that ending coming. Great flash fiction.

Akelamalu said...

Thanks Beach. Those quiet undisturbed moments are rare. :)

I think she got a bone Valerie ;)

They certainly are Brian!

Dogs never seem to get tired of playing do they Margaret?

Definitely one or the other Daryl. Thanks. x

Thanks Mam Zen x

Good to hear that there are still some brave men about Crystal Jigsaw

Thanks Lady's Life :)

Definitely Anthony :)

Glad to hear you got the twist Ron, I was beginning to think it hadn't worked. x

Why thankyouRamblingon :)

Ah you got the twist too Ellie excellent!

Mike Golch said...

yeh for Penny!!!

cheshire wife said...

How lucky was that woman!

Shrinky said...

Oh, you are so, so clever - it never crossed my mind until the very end Penny was actually a DOG!! Brilliant.

G-Man said...

Penny's a heroine!
Is this a true story?
Loved your 55 Ake
Thanks for playing, and have a Kick Ass Week-End

Nara Malone said...

Cute twist at the end. Didn't see it coming.

Cad said...

I was hoping this would say
'woman saved dog from drowning'!!

Secret Agent Woman said...

That one was sweet.

Taylor Boomer said...

amazing 55,

I thought of Penny a human until I read the last line.

a dog understand "fetch" indeed.
smiles.

most entertaining 55 story, it makes me smile.

Doctor FTSE said...

Life is full of such reversals. Dog bites man is not news.
Man bites dog is headlines!

Akelamalu said...

Definitely Yay for Penny Mike :)

Very lucky Cheshire Wife!

That exactly what I wanted you to think Shrinky, thanks. x

No it's pure fiction G-man!

Ah the twist worked then Nara :)

Now that would make a good ending Cad :)

Thanks SAW

So glad the twist worked and you enjoyed it Taylor :)

That's true Doctor FTSE ;)

Banker Chick said...

I am catching up. Penny is a brave dog.

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