Finding the open window they took advantage.
The men climbed through in search of valuables.
Peering through the bedroom doorway they saw the occupier.
He lay, eyes staring vacantly, unblinking, unmoving.
"Christ, he's dead!" said one.
"Oh well, he won't miss this lot now will he?" said his mate, as he searched the bedroom cupboards.
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And sadly that's probably what would happen. Excellent 55!
Great piece of writing.
Little did they know he was feigning death in order to catch them in the act....
That's the point I was trying to make AJ, glad you got it. x
Thanks Beach :)
That would be a good scenario Valerie :)
i think that might creep me out enough to not take anything...
Sadly ,True To Life.....
Now this is pretty inspiring.
i knew it, he wasn't dead! good way not to get hurt though!
smiles, bee
xoxoxoxoxo
I can really believe it. Excellent point.
Me too but they're hardened burglars Brian!
I think it is Tony :(
Thanks Scots Lass
He could have been a good actor Bee
Me too Anthony.
"Oh well, he won't miss this lot now will he?" said his mate, as he searched the bedroom cupboards."
Bwhahahahahahahahaha!
You're endings ALWAYS get me!
Another brilliant and clever Flash 55, m'dear!
Have a wonderful weekend.....X
I thought a little dark, just glad to find out he was playing possum.
Obviously not worried about being done for murder as well burglary.
For What?
Searching For What?
AKE!!!!!!!!!
Another Gem from the Mind of the Mistress...Hehehehehe
Thanks for playing, and have a Kick Ass Week-End
(2 days in a row)
Hmmmmmmm
Aloha from Waikiki;
Comfort Spiral
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Thanks Ron
It is a dark one BankerChick and I'm not sure he's pretending.
They're not worried about anything except getting something to sell Cheshire Wife :(
Searching for anything they can sell, probably to buy drugs G. I notice you came back twice hon, thanks. x
Indeed Cloudia x
Tis a cold world we live in at times. In my head, I saw the person in the room sit up and whisper, "Boo!" ;)
Did you see my Malaysian prison video showing a grown man getting spanked on the bare arse 20 times with a broom handle sized cane? That's what I think they ought to do to housebreakers it's the most disgusting crime and I caused great offence in a crackhouse once by glowering at someone who came in bosting about a "drum" as the scum who do it call it. I really hate burglars. BTW I had to take the video down it was so gross. Blood everywhere and the criminal trying not to scream. I thought seeing a grown man get a punishment associated with school would be funny but it really was not funny. Which is why I think they should do it to housebreakers ha ha ha.
Okay -- this totally sounds like a scene our a movie like "Waking Ned Devine!!!!"
Ah, so funny my dear Alekamalu, you are.
here is my 55.
xoxo
Whoops, typo -- I meant "out" of a movie...
Oh crap and a BIG typo on your name -- Akelamalu.
slinks quietly off your blog rather embarassed.....
xoxo
Much to think about...
other shoe
Yes I remember seeing that video on your blog Gleds. I think the punishment for this sort of crime should be more severe than it is but I'm not sure I would recommend that.
Hey don't worry about the typos Jannie, glad you liked my 55.
Indeed Gautami
THat's a sad state for us to be in, I wish it wasn't so believable.
At least he won't be upset about being robbed.
I hope he comes back and haunts them. ;)
--snow
I love reading these!
Ghoulish, but clever!
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