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Friday, 15 April 2011

Friday 55 Flash Fiction #160 Precious Cargo.....


They were chasing him, trying to trip him take it away.


Heading straight for the opening, twisting, turning, so they couldn't grab him.


Almost there, he held on tight to the precious cargo.


A roar went up


as he slid over the line with the rugby ball safe in his arms and scored a try.



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20 comments:

MorningAJ said...

And the crowd roared!

Excellent 55. I didn't know that was coming.

Beach Bum said...

Awesome!

Grandpa said...

Now I imagined a drug dealer being pursued by the police...where the roar came from, I haven't quite figure out...LOL!

Grandpa
Life on The Farm

Valerie said...

Fooled again... for a minute there I was on tenterhooks....

Thom said...

Wow my friend. You changed this up. I was so waiting for something evil. Excellent story. Have a wonderful weekend :)

Empress Bee (of the high sea) said...

didn't see that one coming! good one...

smiles, bee
xoxoxoxoxoxo

Daryl said...

SCORE!

Linda said...

And I bet that's exactly how the players feel when they're running for the goal!

aims said...

(smiling) You're so good at this!

Akelamalu said...

They did indeed AJ!

Thanks Beach :)

Ah no, not a drug dealer, a rugby player Grandpa LOL

The twist got you again eh Valerie? ;)

I'm so pleased you enjoyed it Thom :)

Aha the twist got you too Bee!

Yes he scored Daryl :)

I'm sure it is Linda

Why thankyou Aims, you're very kind. x

A Lady's Life said...

Isn't this always exciting to see.
One never grows tired of watching goals scored.:)

Brian Miller said...

and the crowd goes wild!!!! RWAARRRAWWW!

secret agent woman said...

I was close - I was guessing a football. Of course, that's my American bias.

G-Man said...

Is that like a Touchdown?
Loved your sweaty story Ake!
Suspensful till the end.
Excellent 55 Pearlie Mae.
Thanks for playing, and have a Kick Ass Week-End...G

Cloudia said...

GOAL!!!! LOL





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Dianne said...

I have always wanted to see a rugby match!!
a Scots friend of mine tells me I'd enjoy it

love your play by play :)

Travis Cody said...

Gotta love sports!

Akelamalu said...

I like those rugby players thighs Lady's Life ;)

Indeed they do Brian :)

Well you were close SAW :)

Yes it's like a touchdown G-man

It's like a goal Cloudia

Rugby is more exciting than football in my book Dianne, I'm sure you'd like it.

I know you do Trav :)

Maggie May said...

Aw...... rugby! What a boring end!!!!!! LOL!
Maggie X

Nuts in May

theothersideofparis said...

Another story well converted!