They were chasing him, trying to trip him take it away.
Heading straight for the opening, twisting, turning, so they couldn't grab him.
Almost there, he held on tight to the precious cargo.
A roar went up
as he slid over the line with the rugby ball safe in his arms and scored a try.
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18 comments:
And the crowd roared!
Excellent 55. I didn't know that was coming.
Now I imagined a drug dealer being pursued by the police...where the roar came from, I haven't quite figure out...LOL!
Grandpa
Life on The Farm
Fooled again... for a minute there I was on tenterhooks....
Wow my friend. You changed this up. I was so waiting for something evil. Excellent story. Have a wonderful weekend :)
didn't see that one coming! good one...
smiles, bee
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And I bet that's exactly how the players feel when they're running for the goal!
(smiling) You're so good at this!
They did indeed AJ!
Thanks Beach :)
Ah no, not a drug dealer, a rugby player Grandpa LOL
The twist got you again eh Valerie? ;)
I'm so pleased you enjoyed it Thom :)
Aha the twist got you too Bee!
Yes he scored Daryl :)
I'm sure it is Linda
Why thankyou Aims, you're very kind. x
Isn't this always exciting to see.
One never grows tired of watching goals scored.:)
and the crowd goes wild!!!! RWAARRRAWWW!
I was close - I was guessing a football. Of course, that's my American bias.
Is that like a Touchdown?
Loved your sweaty story Ake!
Suspensful till the end.
Excellent 55 Pearlie Mae.
Thanks for playing, and have a Kick Ass Week-End...G
GOAL!!!! LOL
Aloha from Honolulu
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I have always wanted to see a rugby match!!
a Scots friend of mine tells me I'd enjoy it
love your play by play :)
Gotta love sports!
I like those rugby players thighs Lady's Life ;)
Indeed they do Brian :)
Well you were close SAW :)
Yes it's like a touchdown G-man
It's like a goal Cloudia
Rugby is more exciting than football in my book Dianne, I'm sure you'd like it.
I know you do Trav :)
Aw...... rugby! What a boring end!!!!!! LOL!
Maggie X
Nuts in May
Another story well converted!
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