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Friday, 12 November 2010

Friday 55 Flash Fiction #141 Colours....



Mmmmm, what colour? she thought.


It has to be something dramatic, maybe Mandarin or Sunshine Yellow?


Something to impact with the black.


Then she saw it - Fuchsia - that was it!


She removed the lid from the tin of paint and smiled in delight


before promptly tipping the contents over the bonnet of the love-rat's car.


Friday 55 Flash Fiction is brought to you by G-man (Mr Knowitall). The idea is you write a story in exactly 55 words. If you want to take part pop over and let G-man know when you've posted your 55.

27 comments:

MorningAJ said...

Oh I wish! There have been times in my past when I really would have liked to do that.

Excellent!

anthonynorth said...

But such a pretty colour. Hope he appreciates it :-)

Belinda Munoz said...

A colorful release! Enjoyable 55!

mrsnesbitt said...

A wonderful start to my day! Loved it! I have grossly exceeded 55 today - couldn't help it! lol!

joanny said...

Oh a wild child--- interesting and colorful 55er,

cheers,
joanny

Valerie said...

Oh this is a great 55. Obviously not a penny was wasted when she bought the paint.

Brian Miller said...

hehe..unless of course you are he...smiles.

Daryl said...

So much more effective than 'keying' it

Suz said...

Oh lordie...what a way to start my day!
that was so satisfying to read!!!
and you held it back until the end...great piece of writing!
Thanks for visiting my garden wench blog..btw

Austin said...

he he, good one

Spiderman's Ride is my 55 this week.

Ron said...

"before promptly tipping the contents over the bonnet of the love-rat's car."

HAHAHAHAHAHA...way to go, girl!

*smiling in delight*

Tee, hee!

Fab 55, m'dear!

Enjoy your weekend!

X

Akelamalu said...

I think there are a lot of women thinking the same thing AJ!


Somehow I don't think he will Anthony. ;)


Quite Belinda LOL


Glad you enjoyed it Denise x


Thanks Joanny


Well worth the money I'd say Valerie!


Well yes of course Brian ;)


That was the alternative revenge Daryl ;)


Glad you enjoyed it Suz :)


Cheers Austin


Thank Ron glad you liked it. x

Eric Alder said...

Love-rat? I'm not sure what that is for certain, but it can't be good! Amusing 55, Akelamalu!

G-Man said...

Bonnet...hehehehe
Love hath no fury eh Ake?
Loved your 55 My Dear.
Exquisite!!
Thanks for playing, and have a Kick Ass Week-End...G

Spiky Zora Jones said...

akelamalu: Oh my...is she a bad girl or just and artist without canvas to express herself? hehehe

hehehe...she did him a favor...Fuchsia colored cars is the vogue, I hear.

have a fab wekend sweetie. xxx

secret agent woman said...

Love-rat. snort

PattiKen said...

Oh, I like her style! Good one.

Empress Bee (of the High Sea) said...

the car? oh no! ha ha ha

smiles, bee
xoxoxoxoxoxo

Linda said...

Leave it to a woman to want to make sure that it's just the right color!

Mona said...

Chuckle! I wonder why revengeful lovers always go after their ex 's cars! :D

Akelamalu said...

A love-rat is a man who cheats on a woman Eric. Glad you found it amusing. :)

I think you call it a hood G-man and you're right hell hath no fury.......

Of course she did him a favour Spiky ;)

You know he deserved it SAW, don't you?

Glad you liked it Pattiken

Yes Bee, his car!

Well we are considerate like that aren't we Linda? LOL

Well they do say a man's car is an extension of you know what so that's why, I guess Mona! ;)

Quilly said...

Nothing like a splash of color to brighten up a dark paint job! LOL!

Travis Cody said...

Oh my!

Akelamalu said...

That's what I thought Quilly ;)

Indeed Trav ;)

Shrinky said...

Oh, I am SO with her.. teehee!

Nessa said...

You go girl. Revenge with flare.

Akelamalu said...

I knew you would be Shrinky ;0

You got it Nessa LOL