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Friday, 6 August 2010

Friday 55 Flash Fiction # 130 New Look....


The surgeon carefully removed the face, then sewed on the new one.


He'd done it once before, that had given him the idea.


It was risky but would be worth it.


He needed his new girlfriend to look exactly like his wife.


Then no-one would realise his wife was missing and that he'd murdered her.




Friday 55 Flash Fiction is brought to you by G-man (Mr Knowitall). The idea is you write a story in exactly 55 words. If you want to take part pop over and let G-man know when you've posted your 55.

34 comments:

Dan's Fi-ver said...

That's a bit dark for a Friday morning! X

Linda said...

Ah, there's that Akelmalu twist that I so love! Good one, girl!

MorningAJ said...

Oooo. That's a creepy start to my day! We have to assume that the girlfriend is in on it, of course. Otherwisw there'll be more than 55 words when she comes round from the anaesthetic. (:

mrsnesbitt said...

Oooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooh! Deep and dark!

A Daft Scots Lass said...

Twisted.

tony said...

Some People Are Soooo two-faced !

secret agent woman said...

Another Stepford Wife!

Valerie said...

Oooooer, that's wicked! I'd hate to be his wife or girl friend. I loved Tony's comment.

Empress Bee (of the High Sea) said...

i wonder what the girlfriend will think of this? ha ha ha

smiles, bee
xoxoxoxoxoxo

Ron said...

OMG...that totally got me at the end!!!

Brilliant as usual, m'dear! Absolutely brilliant!

Have a great weekend!

X

Mama Zen said...

Oooo, very cool!

Akelamalu said...

Mmmm yes I suppose it is Dan's Fiver ;)

Glad you enjoyed it Linda x


The girlfriend thinks she's having a facelift Morning AJ! :0

Just for a change Mrs N ;)

Definitely Scots Lass ;)

Quite Tony LOL

Yep SAW ;)

Twisted yes ;)

I dread to think Bee :0

You're very kind Ron, thanks hon. x

Cheers Mama Zen x

Brian Miller said...

oh deliciously creepy 55! love it!

Thom said...

You know my friend, you could actually complete the perfect murder and/or crime in real life :) LOL This is so well done. Excellent. :) Have a wonderful Friday :)

Cloudia said...

yikes!




Aloha from Honolulu :)

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Akelamalu said...

So glad you liked it Brian :)

I don't know whether to take that as a compliment or not Thom! LOL

Yikes indeed Cloudia ;)

Alice Audrey said...

Yikes! Does the girlfriend know what he's up to?

My 55 is here.

anthonynorth said...

Lovely touch of black humour in this. Excellent.

Gledwood said...

O dear me that's like something out of those old Tales of the Unexpected!

Jannie Funster said...

Ahh, Hannibal Lechter lives? :0

AWESOME creepy 55.

Quilly said...

But it isn't the skin that determines shape, it is bone! And what of eye color? And hair color? And height and weight and shape ....

And what do you mean, he'd done it before? Is this the second girlfriend he's given his wife's face? How creepy!

G-Man said...

Won't the girlfriend be missing?
hahahahahaha
Loved your 55 Ake.
Thanks for playing.
Please have a Kick Ass Week-End!

Shrinky said...

"The gf thinks she's having a face-lift" Haaaaaaaaaaaa, only you, my friend..! Wonderful, I so love how your twisted mind works (wink).

Akelamalu said...

I don't think she does Alice ;)

Cheers Anthony :)

Yes I suppose it is Gleds ;)

He's not going to eat her Jannie LOL

He's done the operation before Quilly, which is what gave him the idea :)

No they will just tell people she's had a facelift G-man ;)

Me, twisted, Shrinky? Whatever do you mean? ;)

Mona said...

What about the girlfriend? Won't she go missing too?

I could never live with a wife lookalike after murdering her :D

The Silver Fox said...

Delightfully twisted!

Maggie May said...

Hope she didn't end up the same way!
Ha ha!
Maggie X

Nuts in May

Spiky Zora Jones said...

How do I get in your head? woo hoo that one is good. what gets me is why isn't there a movie like that...it would be soo cool.

great job again honey. hehehe.
xxxx

KB said...

Eek, scary stuff. Enjoy the rest of your weekend.

Mine’s here.

Julia Smith said...

OMG, Akelamalu - SO creepy and so good!

Travis Cody said...

Chilling.

Dumdad said...

Grisly!

nitebyrd said...

Ooooo! Creepy! I love it!

mythopolis said...

Ha ha!!! Great! I write mostly flash too. Mostly since after a few paragraphs, my mind begins to wander away!