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Friday, 16 July 2010

Friday 55 Flash Fiction #127 Deprived...


Chico hated her for depriving him.


She said it was for 'his own good' - How?


He was miserable and would look at her dolefully.


He tried ignoring her, even crying, but she wouldn't give in.


After many months he got used to it and now he was a happy


lightweight, lithe, labrador who could run.



Friday 55 Flash Fiction is brought to you by G-man (Mr Knowitall). The idea is you write a story in exactly 55 words. If you want to take part pop over and let G-man know when you've posted your 55.

31 comments:

evalinn said...

Good story...and good dog! :-)

mrsnesbitt said...

LOL! Love this!
Mine is up too - all thanks to you hun xxx

Thom said...

This is just wonderful. You are so clever with these Man's/Woman's best friend :) Well done my friend Have a wonderful Friday :)

Shrinky said...

Can Chico please have a word with my Golden Retriever?

A Daft Scots Lass said...

Sit, Booboo, Sit! Good dawg.

moondustwriter said...

Love labs.
they do have those eyes that can make you do most anything
What a great 55!!!

Mine is reck less

Empress Bee (of the High Sea) said...

well at least it wasn't a cat, they would never forgive! ha ha ha

smiles, bee
xoxoxoxoxoxo

Akelamalu said...

Thanks Evalinn :)

So glad you like it Mrs N :)

Cheers Thom you're very kind. x

I'll send Chico over Shrinky ;)

He he he you got it Scots Lass :)

They do indeed Moondustwriter and thanks for visiting. :)

You're right Bee, cats are a law unto themselves!

Valerie said...

Another little gem.
I always told my dogs that I knew best... of course, they didn't believe me.

anthonynorth said...

The kind of ending I like. Nice one.

Finding Pam said...

I have my lab on a diet too and she is so hungry, but alas she will be able to run faster and be healthier.

This was a great story. Is it true?

buffalodick said...

A little different today!

Ron said...

OMG...how PRECIOUS!

As always, you ROCK, m'dear!

Thanks for sharing.

Have a great weekend!

X

PattiKen said...

I love this little story. I can totally see that mournful, don't-you-fee-badly-for-treating-me-this-way look.

Brian Miller said...

a happy story...smiles. bet he is loving life all teh more now...nice 55!

Akelamalu said...

Thanks Valerie. Of course you know what's best for your dogs :)

Glad you liked it Anthony :)

You're being cruel to be kind Pam. No it isn't a real story.

Just for a change Buff :)

Pets are precious Ron ;)

Oh yes Pattiken, those eyes! I don't seem to be able to open your blog m'dear I'm sorry.

Oh yes Brian, he must be having so much more fun now. :)

Monkey Man said...

OMG my dog does the same thing. It must be in their genes. Great 55. My 55 is HERE .

Cloudia said...

Aloha from Waikiki, Poetess

Comfort Spiral

Maggie May said...

As usual, we were led to expect one thing, only to find a complete twist to the tale!
Very good.
Maggie X

Nuts in May

Linda said...

Excellent as always! Now if I could just get someone to treat ME like a Labrador maybe I could lose some weight!

secret agent woman said...

Perseverance is key.

Quilly said...

I hope Chico's owners were just as diligent with their own diets.

g-man said...

Chico...?
Hahahahahahahaha
Loved it Ake...You always make me smile.
Excellent 55 My Dear.
Thanks for playing, and have a Kick Ass Week-End...G

tattytiara said...

Ah hahaha - well that was a delightful little tease of a piece!

Mama Zen said...

My dog is spending his time looking at me mournfully, too.

hope said...

Ah the grow bigger but some pup still remains....which explains my 109 lb. Lab's evening greeting. :)

Travis Cody said...

Good doggy!

Gledwood said...

!
Reminded me of Liz's dog George
from liz-and-harvey.blogspot.com
I don't know if you're acquainted with George...

Eternally Distracted said...

You are a clever trevor!!

Bankerchick said...

We have been doing this for Gwennie as she has hip problems, Mr Bankerchick has been firmer with this while I was gone and she is so slim, It was good for her!

CrystalChick said...

So clever! Good writing. Love it!
Yay, blogger is letting me comment.
xo