Every Monday Susan will post a picture for the subject of your story. Microfiction means the shortest of short stories. Think Aesop's fables, comic strips, or even jokes: complete stories that can be told in under a minute. For this game, the limit is a tweetable 140 characters or fewer, including punctuation and spaces.
Here's today's picture and my contribution.
The dog’s lazy but our staff aren’t.
Book now for the best holiday you’ll ever have.
We’re so close to the sea sharks leap into our pool!
35 comments:
A good way to get the old grey matter working on a Monday morning!
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I know you say it doesn't bother you when I blither in German, but it is a new thing and it wasn't what my blog was about. I'm thinking of just opening yet another blog, this time in German
I just get the feeling it is slightly annoying/seems pretentious/irrelevant to most people. Even though everything I've put up in German is there in English too
actually I'm gonna put up a poll on the matter. Please vote!
I'm crying (haulen) on your shoulder (die Schulter) about this because you are the voice of reason
;-)...
Now THAT is positive spin marketing! Taking the rural and making it downright enticing!
i'd totally go there! ha ha ha
smiles, bee
xoxoxoxoxoxo
Clever and witty, I loved it!
Have a lovely week x
SLM is right. Very positive spin on a negative. Sharks! Yikes.
I love the idea of the hard-working staff ushering the leaping shark out of their pool. Nothing lazy about that at all!
Very clever take on this week's MM--have a great week.
Neat take - could almost bring myself to stay there were it not for the sharks ;-)
Clever advert, that :-)
What a fun, clever take on the pic of the day! Love it! Have a great week!
Sylvia
ooh one of the turn a negative into a positive centres. Mine is a homage to On the Waterfront this week and is here.
The shark definitely puts me off staying there, but your take on the picture is excellent.
Ooh..I think they need a new copy writer for their ads...maybe they could just change "sharks" to "tunas." Clever take on this week's microfiction photo!
You are soooooooooo clever, m'dear!
Only YOU could think of something so BRILLIANT!
Hey, I LOVE your new template design! It looks faaaaaaaaabulous! Brava!
Have a great a Monday!
X
Yes it is Mrs N :)
Gleds - Why not start another blog and duplicate whatever you write here on it in German. You could leave a link on both blogs to the other one then your readers can enjoy it in whatever is their preference?
Thanks SouthLakesMom :)
LOL really Bee???
Why thankyou Ellie :)
Cheers Peggy - I think I'd give the sharks a miss too. ;)
I wouldn't like their job Michael LOL
The sharks would put me off staying too Jabblog LOL
Thanks Anthony :)
Glad you liked it Sylvia :)
Thanks John
Me too Valerie, thanks. x
I think yo're rightt, sharks are definitely more scary than Tuna Pat
You're very kind Ron thanks hon. Glad you like the new template. :)
Lol -very clever!
Aloha ha ha from Waikiki
Comfort Spiral
Now that is close to the sea!
I love the part about the sharks in the pool ;)
Very good, clever, creative, etc! I liked it a lot!! :)
I feel like booking my holiday!
You get some good ideas.
Maggie X
Nuts in May
Yikes, I've heard of alligators invading pools, but not sharks. Definitely not my kind of place. :)
You had me until the last line....guess I won't be booking a room with you. ;0
More funny stuff!
Yep...Susan must be in West Virginia!
Could almost be a bit of Thunderball happening. Is 007 stopping by??
Could almost be a bit of Thunderball happening. Is 007 stopping by??
Thankyou Casdok :)
Aloha Cloudia
It sure is She Writes :)
Glad you like it Dianne :)
Thankyou muchly Becky and welcome here. :)
You fancy that Maggie? LOL
I wouldn't like the sharks either Janel!
I guess the sharks in the pool have put a lot of you off Hope ;)
I'm happy to make you smile Trav :)
I think she is G-man
Possibly Bill ;)
I'd like to book a long weekend in September please!
I thought it was a catfish!
I think that I just vacationed there!
A vacation like that would be lovely minus the whole sharks jumping in the pool aspect of course!
I just read your Flash Fiction story for Friday, too, and it was brilliantly you as always! You have such a twist with your endings - I love 'em!
That's a cute caption. You should send it to the company and see if they'd use it.
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