Tears streamed down Beth's face.
She was watching her husband's coffin slide silently through the curtains.
Family and friends patted her hand, assuring her things would be fine.
They didn't know that her tears were because
she was thinking of all the hurt and humiliation he'd caused her,
before she'd laced his food with arsenic.
Friday 55 Flash Fiction is brought to you by G-man (Mr Knowitall). The idea is you write a story in exactly 55 words. If you want to take part pop over and let G-man know when you've posted your 55.
28 comments:
Tears of joy in this case.
Well played.
She got her revenge.
You put me off growing up and getting married.
Way to go!
Definitely tears of joy...
Grand 55 as usual.
Ah, revenge can sometimes be sweet.
Nicely done.
Such crocodile tears! LOL
Hilarious!
oh, shilling 55...leaves me wanting to know more...nicely done.
my 55 is up!
He must have been wickedly mean and deserved to die. Ha!
Thats My Ake...
Back to Murder and Mayhem!!
Excellent 55...
Remind me to stay on your good side OK?
You Rock Baby,,,Have a Kick Ass Week-End...G
Definitely Jeff!
She certainly did Stan Ski ;)
Oh sorry Changnoi :(
Quite Dumdad ;)
Tears of joy for Beth definitely Valerie
Can't it just Anthony? LOL
She certainly didn't miss him Jinksy
Glad it made you smile Mrs N
Thanks Brian :)
Oh he was and he did Pam!
You could never get on my bad side G-man x
oh the bad girl! ha ha ha
smiles, bee
xoxoxoxoxoxo
Sweet revenge!
I think I went to that funeral last week.....
Yes. Yes. Yes. This is my kind of 55. Twisted at the end. I love it. My 55 is HERE .
WARNING! Us OLD guys should not eat or drink tonight!
GooooD story in "55"!!!
Here is MINE
LOL. I love it when I arrive at your blog on Flash Fiction Friday.
Bullies never seem to realize they can't keep getting away with it. You'd think he'd eat out.
Mine is here.
She was BAD Bee!
Yes indeed Misty
You did Mimi? ;)
So glad you liked it Monkey Man :)
I'm sure you've nothing to worry about steveroni :)
I'm happy if you're happy San :)
Never carry too much life insurance...
It truly is hell when one can only kill them once ....
nice one
I now this isn't the point of the post, but why in the world do people say stupid things like everything will be "fine" at funerals?
Oh okay!!
nice one!1
Too much of a temptation eh Buff?
For some yes it is Quilly ;)
Cheers Gleds
I really don't know SAW, but it's true. :0
Thankyou Dr. Chandada
I always get a belly laugh from your 55's... it's a little scary how often you kill people off though ;0)
Ooh wicked wicked 55! Revenge is something, huh?
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