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Friday, 18 June 2010

Friday 55 Flash Fiction #123 The Funeral.....




Tears streamed down Beth's face.


She was watching her husband's coffin slide silently through the curtains.


Family and friends patted her hand, assuring her things would be fine.


They didn't know that her tears were because


she was thinking of all the hurt and humiliation he'd caused her,


before she'd laced his food with arsenic.




Friday 55 Flash Fiction is brought to you by G-man (Mr Knowitall). The idea is you write a story in exactly 55 words. If you want to take part pop over and let G-man know when you've posted your 55.

29 comments:

Jeff B said...

Tears of joy in this case.

Well played.

Stan Ski said...

She got her revenge.

Changnoi said...

You put me off growing up and getting married.

Dumdad said...

Way to go!

Valerie said...

Definitely tears of joy...
Grand 55 as usual.

anthonynorth said...

Ah, revenge can sometimes be sweet.
Nicely done.

jinksy said...

Such crocodile tears! LOL

mrsnesbitt said...

Hilarious!

Brian Miller said...

oh, shilling 55...leaves me wanting to know more...nicely done.

my 55 is up!

Finding Pam said...

He must have been wickedly mean and deserved to die. Ha!

G-Man said...

Thats My Ake...
Back to Murder and Mayhem!!
Excellent 55...
Remind me to stay on your good side OK?
You Rock Baby,,,Have a Kick Ass Week-End...G

Akelamalu said...

Definitely Jeff!

She certainly did Stan Ski ;)

Oh sorry Changnoi :(

Quite Dumdad ;)

Tears of joy for Beth definitely Valerie

Can't it just Anthony? LOL

She certainly didn't miss him Jinksy

Glad it made you smile Mrs N

Thanks Brian :)

Oh he was and he did Pam!

You could never get on my bad side G-man x

Empress Bee (of the High Sea) said...

oh the bad girl! ha ha ha

smiles, bee
xoxoxoxoxoxo

Misty Dawn said...

Sweet revenge!

Mimi Lenox said...

I think I went to that funeral last week.....

Monkey Man said...

Yes. Yes. Yes. This is my kind of 55. Twisted at the end. I love it. My 55 is HERE .

steveroni said...

WARNING! Us OLD guys should not eat or drink tonight!

GooooD story in "55"!!!

Here is MINE

San said...

LOL. I love it when I arrive at your blog on Flash Fiction Friday.

Alice Audrey said...

Bullies never seem to realize they can't keep getting away with it. You'd think he'd eat out.

Mine is here.

Akelamalu said...

She was BAD Bee!

Yes indeed Misty

You did Mimi? ;)

So glad you liked it Monkey Man :)

I'm sure you've nothing to worry about steveroni :)

I'm happy if you're happy San :)

buffalodick said...

Never carry too much life insurance...

Quilly said...

It truly is hell when one can only kill them once ....

Gledwood said...

nice one

secret agent woman said...

I now this isn't the point of the post, but why in the world do people say stupid things like everything will be "fine" at funerals?

Dr. Chandana Shekar said...

Oh okay!!

nice one!1

Akelamalu said...

Too much of a temptation eh Buff?

For some yes it is Quilly ;)

Cheers Gleds

I really don't know SAW, but it's true. :0

Thankyou Dr. Chandada

Travis Cody said...

Oh my.

Eternally Distracted said...

I always get a belly laugh from your 55's... it's a little scary how often you kill people off though ;0)

Menina said...

Ooh wicked wicked 55! Revenge is something, huh?