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Friday, 23 April 2010

Friday 55 Flash Fiction # 115 Rubbish....



Stacey was clearing the loft.


A bird cage, the nest of tables, a light fitting,


battered old suitcase, old shoes, clothes, a tea set.




Mick would be so pleased she'd thrown everything out.


Elsewhere........


"I've got the stash tucked away in the loft in a battered old suitcase" Mick told the rest of the gang....



Friday 55 Flash Fiction is brought to you by G-man (Mr Knowitall). The idea is you write a story in exactly 55 words. If you want to take part pop over and let G-man know when you've posted your 55.


30 comments:

Thom said...

OMG how fun and so perfect for a continuation. Wont Stacey be surprised and Mick will for that matter as well. I can't wait for next week to see if.... Have a great Friday :)

tony said...

Alway Keep A Stash Just incase!

jinksy said...

Maybe time for a quick edit, to add the T onto 'old' ?! Clever 55...

Empress Bee (of the High Sea) said...

getting interesting!

smiles, bee
xoxoxoxoxoxo

Misty Dawn said...

I just love it when you put a spin on these posts! Great one!

Ron said...

OMG Akelamalu, this one had me totally wondering as I scrolled through each sentence.

LOVED the ending!

?????????

Thanks for sharing yet, another great Flash 55, m'dear!

Have a great weekend!
X

Valerie said...

Really good. An unexpected ending. All I could think of at the end was Whoooops!

Daryl said...

Applause ... love how clever you are with words and how nice of Blogger to let me comment ..

Flowerpot said...

very good Ak!

San said...

I love the way you work a clever plot twist into so few words. Bravo!

Brian Miller said...

haha. nice 55. the dangers of low motivation...

mine is up!

Jingle said...

bright 55,
have a fun Friday!

anthonynorth said...

Ah, the best laid plans :-)
Nice one.

hope said...

When will the men folk realize there's not a safe place in a house that we won't at least THINK about cleaning? :)

Travis said...

Yikes! Somebody is not going to be happy!

G-Man said...

I cleaned my office today, and carried out three huge garbage bags full og stuff.
I know there is a treasure in there someplace!
Excellent 55 Ake...
I loved it!
Thank you for visiting, thank you for playing, and have a Kick Ass Week-End...G

Shrinky said...

Teehee, be sure your crimes will catch you out, eh? Lovely!

buffalodick said...

When my MIL died, they found uncashed checks hidden all over the house!

Sh@KiR@ CK said...

OMG.Isn't that the WORST thing!
Very powerful and funny 55!
Mine is here
hugs
shakira

Dianne said...

this would make a great start to a wonderful mystery movie!

Spiky Zora Jones said...

akelamalu: hahaha...See that's why pirates buried their loot. ;)

have a fab weekend sweetie. xxx

Julia Smith said...

Score a point for hoarders everywhere!

secret agent woman said...

Sounds like Mick is in trouble.

Cloudia said...

I JUST told my niece to go through EVERYTHING carefully before she disposes of my possessions...


Many years from now, you understand (God willing)


Aloha from Waikiki


Comfort Spiral

Eternally Distracted said...

Great 55... and unexpected :0)

Akelamalu said...

I have a feeling Mick and Stacey are heading for the divorce courts Thom ;)

Well Mick tried but was thwarted by Stacey Tony

Well spotted Jinksy and thanks.

It will be when Mick gets home Bee! LOL

Glad you enjoyed it Misty x


I'm pleased it had you wondering Ron, that's the aim. x


Cheers Val, I think Mick will be saying more than Whoops though don't you? LOL


I'm always pleased when blogger lets you comment Daryl and thanks for keep trying. x

Thanks Flowerpot x

I try San, glad you like it.

LOL quite Brian :0

Cheers Jingle :)

Yes, there's always someone or something to thwart them Anthony :)

Haha you're so right Hope!

There'll be tears no doubt Trav!

You're actually been clearing out G-man? I don't believe it! ;)

Definitely Shrinky :)

Really Buff? What a find!

It was the worst thing for Mick Shakira! LOL

You think so Dianne? Thankyou.

Mick would have been better off burying it wouldn't he Spiky? ;)

I don't think Mick would agree Julia LOL

Mick and Stacey both SAW ;)

Good idea Cloudia!

Thanks Eternally Distracted x

Maggie May said...

Oh dear.... thats it then.... gone!

Nuts in May

happily retired gal said...

I've finally opened my reader for the first time in AGES and have enjoyed catching up here this morning. Thanks for making your entire post available in your feeds. You never cease to come up with something wonderful with these Flash Fictions. I do LOVE your soapstone elephant and have a friend who would covet it for HER collection! Hope all's well with you and yours.
Hugs and blessings,

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