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Friday, 13 June 2008

Friday 55 Flash Fiction # 31 On the pull

On the pull


Can I buy you a drink? asked the beautiful blonde.


“Why not?” he answered “ Do you come here often?”




“Only when I want to pick up strangers” she replied resting her hand on his thigh.


“Well that was fun, honey” he said

“I suppose we’d better get back now and take the baby sitter home!”




Friday 55 Flash Fiction is brought to you by G-man (Mr Knowitall). The object of the game is to write a story using exactly 55 words. If you want to take part pop over and let G-man know when you've posted your 55.

27 comments:

ciara said...

ha ha good one, ake! :) mine is up, too.

Flowerpot said...

great one Ak - as ever!

girl with the mask said...

Awwww, I like that one! Romance in the old dogs yet, then!

Dumdad said...

So that's what you do in a bar...

buffalodickdy said...

There are two kinds of fantasies: unrealisic and plausable- that was plausable!

Odat said...

Ha!
Another good one as usual.

Peace

Josh said...

Haha, that was cute. Have a great weekend!

acey said...

hahaha. good 1! have a fab weekend, akelamalu!

Dianne said...

keeping the marriage alive eh?

cool!!

good one.

Akelamalu said...

Thanks ciara x

Cheers Flowerpot x

Yes romance is alive and kicking GIM ;)

Oooh not me Dumdad ;)

Definitely Buff!

Aw thanks Odat x

You too Josh and thanks. :)

Thanks Acey You have a fab weekend too. x

Well it's one option Dianne :)

James Goodman, Author said...

lol, that was a great 55, AK. Thanks for the smile. :D

Empress Bee (of the High Sea) said...

you do wonders in 55 words!

smiles, bee
xxoxoxoxoxoxo

Donnetta Lee said...

Cute 55er! Spark is still there. Mom and Dad carrying on-blush.
Donnetta

Maggie May said...

Very good!

Linda said...

Who says old married folks can't have a little romance in their lives?!?

Sandi McBride said...

Loved it LOVED IT! Put me in mind of Do you like Pina Coladas, lol
lovely
Sandi

citizen of the world said...

Very safe pick-up, I'd say.

smarmoofus said...

*giggle* Keeping the magic going... how fun. *smile* I love this. It speaks of an enduring relationship. Such a strong bond. And yet, they remember to flirt with one another and remind each other that they're attracted. *hides her depressing 55* I like yours better.

-smarmoofus

Ron said...

You ALWAYS get me on the "punch line" with these!!!

Clever and smart you are!

(oooh...and it looks like their having a nice glass of RED wine...my FAV!)

Thanks for another great Friday 55, my friend!

Enjoy your weekend!

G-Man said...

Oooooh Ake, a saucy tale today!!
Very nicely done. Thanks for playing, and I'll see you soon...G

Mike Golch said...

I like the 55 thing,I'd do it but I donot feel that I would be that creative as you.That's my story and I'm sticking to it.

Akelamalu said...

YOu're welcome James I'm pleased you liked it. :)

Aw thanks Bee x

Yes Mom's and Dads do carry on Donnetta ;)

Cheers Maggie :)

Quite Linda!

Glad you liked it Sandi

Oh yes Citizen very safe! LOL

Flirting can be so much fun Smarmoofus ;)

Red wine - yes Ron what else??? xx

I just fancied a bit of sauce today g-man ((wink))

You could surprise yourself Mike - go on have a go! :)

la bellina mammina said...

I LOVE THIS!

Akelamalu said...

Thanks Bella. x

Travis said...

Sometimes a little play is just the thing to spice up a relationship!

Akelamalu said...

((wink)) I know Travis :)

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