On the pull
Can I buy you a drink? asked the beautiful blonde.
“Why not?” he answered “ Do you come here often?”
Can I buy you a drink? asked the beautiful blonde.
“Why not?” he answered “ Do you come here often?”

“Only when I want to pick up strangers” she replied resting her hand on his thigh.

“Well that was fun, honey” he said
“I suppose we’d better get back now and take the baby sitter home!”
Friday 55 Flash Fiction is brought to you by G-man (Mr Knowitall). The object of the game is to write a story using exactly 55 words. If you want to take part pop over and let G-man know when you've posted your 55.
26 comments:
ha ha good one, ake! :) mine is up, too.
great one Ak - as ever!
Awwww, I like that one! Romance in the old dogs yet, then!
So that's what you do in a bar...
There are two kinds of fantasies: unrealisic and plausable- that was plausable!
Ha!
Another good one as usual.
Peace
Haha, that was cute. Have a great weekend!
hahaha. good 1! have a fab weekend, akelamalu!
keeping the marriage alive eh?
cool!!
good one.
Thanks ciara x
Cheers Flowerpot x
Yes romance is alive and kicking GIM ;)
Oooh not me Dumdad ;)
Definitely Buff!
Aw thanks Odat x
You too Josh and thanks. :)
Thanks Acey You have a fab weekend too. x
Well it's one option Dianne :)
lol, that was a great 55, AK. Thanks for the smile. :D
you do wonders in 55 words!
smiles, bee
xxoxoxoxoxoxo
Cute 55er! Spark is still there. Mom and Dad carrying on-blush.
Donnetta
Very good!
Who says old married folks can't have a little romance in their lives?!?
Loved it LOVED IT! Put me in mind of Do you like Pina Coladas, lol
lovely
Sandi
Very safe pick-up, I'd say.
*giggle* Keeping the magic going... how fun. *smile* I love this. It speaks of an enduring relationship. Such a strong bond. And yet, they remember to flirt with one another and remind each other that they're attracted. *hides her depressing 55* I like yours better.
-smarmoofus
You ALWAYS get me on the "punch line" with these!!!
Clever and smart you are!
(oooh...and it looks like their having a nice glass of RED wine...my FAV!)
Thanks for another great Friday 55, my friend!
Enjoy your weekend!
Oooooh Ake, a saucy tale today!!
Very nicely done. Thanks for playing, and I'll see you soon...G
I like the 55 thing,I'd do it but I donot feel that I would be that creative as you.That's my story and I'm sticking to it.
YOu're welcome James I'm pleased you liked it. :)
Aw thanks Bee x
Yes Mom's and Dads do carry on Donnetta ;)
Cheers Maggie :)
Quite Linda!
Glad you liked it Sandi
Oh yes Citizen very safe! LOL
Flirting can be so much fun Smarmoofus ;)
Red wine - yes Ron what else??? xx
I just fancied a bit of sauce today g-man ((wink))
You could surprise yourself Mike - go on have a go! :)
I LOVE THIS!
Thanks Bella. x
Sometimes a little play is just the thing to spice up a relationship!
((wink)) I know Travis :)
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