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Friday, 20 July 2012

Friday 55 Flash Fiction #200 Surprise....






He opened the door.

"Can I help you?" he enquired.

"I hope so" said the young man.

His face paled as he read the contents of the envelope that he'd been handed.

His past had come back to haunt him.

He'd never thought this would happen when he donated his sperm, twenty one years ago.




Friday 55 Flash Fiction is brought to you by G-man (Mr Knowitall). The idea is you write a story in exactly 55 words. If you want to take part pop over and let G-man know when you've posted your 55.

22 comments:

Jenny Woolf said...

Brilliant, as usual. You have a gift for thinking up a clever plot.

Valerie said...

Oh Wow! You never know what's round the corner waiting to change your life...lol.

MorningAJ said...

Well, he should have thought about that shouldn't he?

Nice 55

Flowerpot said...

I can remember an elderly friend saying exactly this years ago! Blog update over at mine x

Crystal Jigsaw said...

Oh that's fabulous!!

CJ x

Banker Chick said...

Oops! Haunting him....It couldn't be good news!

Secret Agent Woman said...

Uh oh!

Melanie said...

DAMN! That's gonna leave a mark!! Excellent!!!

Ron said...

Clever as usual, m'dear!

You always get me with your surprise endings!

Faaaabulous!

Have a great weekend....X

Akelamalu said...

Why thankyou Jenny :)

You certainly don't Valerie!

He was young and broke at the time AJ ;)

Really Flowerpot? WOW!

Thanks CJ x

Not good news for him Bankerchick!

Yeah SAW!

It is indeed Melanie ;)

Glad you enjoyed it Ron x

Mama Zen said...

Yikes! You do the best 55s, Ake!

Eric (Bubba) Alder said...

Sounds more like a random distribution than a donation. LOL!

Linc said...

Surprise indeed! Very well done.

G-Man said...

It all depends where the donating was done at...:-)
Very dramatic Ake...
But as always...Loved It!!
Thanks for playing, and have a Kick ASS Week-End...G

Gledwood said...

O bloody hell! That can't happen in real life, can it?

Did you know in America you actually get paid for donating BLOOD (as well as sperm)... some poor people donate so much they end up passing out on the streets..!!

Lorraine said...

where do you even get the ideas, let alone the gems you come up with - amazing

Beach Bum said...

Excellent writing!

Yeah, that would be scary but I can understand why a kid would go looking for his sperm donor father.

Brian Miller said...

oh my...i would hope not as well...uncomfortable for sure!

A Lady's Life said...

Oh bummer !

Akelamalu said...

Why thankyou Mama Zen, how kind of you. x

I guess it does Eric

Thanks Linc

That's true G-man, glad you liked it. x

Well according to Flowerpot (above) it can Gleds! I knew about blood donors being paid in the US.

I think I must have a warped mind Lorraine ;)

I can understand them looking too Beach.

A surprise certainly Brian

Yeah Lady's Life

Dianne said...

well done
this would be a great start to a movie

Akelamalu said...

Oh yes I can see how that would pan out Dianne!