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Friday, 23 December 2011

Friday 55 Flash Fiction #182 A Christmas Visitor..



Quietly easing himself down the chimney,

careful to not dislodge too much soot,

he landed gently on the hearth of the fireplace.

“Oh bugger,  I forgot the sack” he whispered up the chimney.

The sack was thrown down

and the robber filled it with the family’s presents from under the tree

before exiting the door!



Sorry were you expecting Santa?? LOL


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24 comments:

Cloudia said...

SO Y O U !

(and I like that :-)


Aloha from Honolulu
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Melanie said...

Doh!!

MorningAJ said...

Ouch! A seasonal warning there. :)

Beach Bum said...

Great story and it got me thinking.

I've often wondered how Santa has avoided being shot while doing his rounds here in the United States. While I own a pistol it is secretly and very safely tucked away making it impossible to retrieve without producing a lot of noise.

Cannot say the same about many other gun owners I know, in fact some of them are rather eager to shoot a burglar. Sort of makes Santa's job a lot harder if you ask me.

Banker Chick said...

Oh no! What a disappointment when they wake up in the morning. You are very ironic this Christmas.

Banker Chick said...

I went to the video and had to click on it several times. Not sure what the problem is....

Akelamalu said...

Glad you like it Cloudiax


Doh indeed Melanie!

Yes it is Lady's Life :(

Oh no, surely no-one would shoot Santa Beach!

Yes I suppose I am Bankerchick for a change. What video were you clicking on????

Daryl Edelstein said...

HA!!!!!

anthonynorth said...

Nice one. although most had already been robbed - by the exorbitant prices for the presents ;-)

Brian Miller said...

ack what a grinch...been through a home break in or two...

TALON said...

Loved the twist! (though Christmas morning is gonna be really yucky at that house) - lol!

pegbur7 said...

That was so not what I was expecting!

Gledwood said...

oh i like that (well i don't, but i do...)

HAVE A FANTASTIC XMAS AND A BRILLIANT 2012!

Empress Bee (of the high sea) said...

oh buggers to the robber! ha ha ha

smiles, bee
xoxoxoxoxo

secret agent woman said...

Suddenly feeling thankful I have a wood stove instead of a fireplace!

G-Man said...

Oh Bugger!!!
I Love that so much..hehehehe
Excellent 55 as always My Friend
Thanks for being such a great Blogger Bud.
Have a Kick Ass Holiday
Merry Christmas Pearlie Mae..:-)

Linda said...

Well bugger that! Here I thought you were doing a nice Santa post and it turns out to have your usual twist, I should've known it!!

Wishing you and yours a very Merry Christmas with all the things and ones you love!

Valerie said...

Food for thought... I think I'll light a fire. Very good, Pearl. I love these gems. Christmas greetings to you and yours.

Finding Pam said...

Wishing you and your family a Merry Christmas and a prosperous Ney Year.

Pam

Dianne said...

oh no!!
a Christmas robbery!!
I love the twists your 55 words take

Merry Christmas Lady

tony said...

:) CHRISTMAS GREETINGS FROM GOD's COUNTY!!!! X

Ron said...

Faaaaaaaabulous Flash 55!!!!

LOVED the ending!

Wishing you and your family a very Merry and Blessed Christmas, m'dear!

(((( You ))))

X ya!

Sometimes Saintly Nick said...

Merry Christmas, my very dear friend!

Travis Cody said...

Well that's not a happy holiday at all!