Friday, 1 July 2011

Friday 55 Flash Fiction #167 Making up......

He wouldn't speak for days after they'd 'had words'.

She always made the first move.

Well not this time,  it was his turn.

She spotted the bouquet on the dining table.

This was a turn-up, him apologising, with flowers!

'To my darling Pauline' the card read.

"Those were delivered for her next door" he mumbled.

Friday 55 Flash Fiction is brought to you by G-man (Mr Knowitall). The idea is you write a story in exactly 55 words. If you want to take part pop over and let G-man know when you've posted your 55.


MorningAJ said...

"Had words". Now there's an expression I've not heard since my mother died.

Just that phrase by itself has conjured up a whole picture of where this is happening. Great stuff.

Beach Bum said...

Great story! Us guys are generally very dependable idiots.

Valerie said...

I wonder if her next door had had words as well :O)

Jingle said...

brilliant twists.
love your 55, as always.

Happy Weekend.

Belinda Munoz said...

A great twist!

Sharon J said...

What a disappointment!

snowelf said...

he is a dog.

Happy weekend Darling!!


Akelamalu said...

My Mum always used to say 'they've had words' AJ - great phrase isn't it? LOL

You got it Beach LOL

Either that or it was her birthday Valerie but if that was the case the flowers will be from a girlfriend no doubt! ;)

Thanks Jingle :)

Cheers Belinda :)

Indeed Sharon

You're right on that one Snow. Happy Weekend to you too my lovely. x

Empress Bee (of the high sea) said...

well buggers to him! ha ha ha

smiles, bee

Ron said...

"Those were delivered for her next door" he mumbled."

HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAA! Hilarious ending, m'dear!

Never saw it coming!

Have a wonderful weekend!


Brian Miller said...

oh it just went from bad to worse...ha. nice twisty 55

Akelamalu said...

Yeah, buggers to him Bee! LOL

Thanks Ron, I'm happy to make you smile.

Glad you enjoyed it Brian :)

Linda said...

And he didn't think to hide them? What a dolt! Now he'd really better start coming up with some words of apology!

G-Man said...

Is this a True Story?
Loved your 55 Pearlie Mae
Thanks for playing, Your 55 nearly made it to normalcy...:P:P
Have a Kick Ass Week-End

Akelamalu said...

He obviously didn't care Linda ;)

No, G not a true story. MWM always comes up trumps, not that we argue much anyways. :)

Anonymous said...

...and then she picked them up and smashed him on the head with them???

Cloudia said...

yes! So difficult sometimes...

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Akelamalu said...

LOL well that's what I'd have done SD&BS!

Indeed it can be Cloudia ;)

secret agent woman said...
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secret agent woman said...

Now he owes her two apologies.

Daryl said...

Ha! men ... such silly creatures

Akelamalu said...

Indeed he does SAW LOL

Aren't they just Daryl? ;)