He wouldn't speak for days after they'd 'had words'.
She always made the first move.
Well not this time, it was his turn.
She spotted the bouquet on the dining table.
This was a turn-up, him apologising, with flowers!
'To my darling Pauline' the card read.
"Those were delivered for her next door" he mumbled.
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22 comments:
"Had words". Now there's an expression I've not heard since my mother died.
Just that phrase by itself has conjured up a whole picture of where this is happening. Great stuff.
Great story! Us guys are generally very dependable idiots.
I wonder if her next door had had words as well :O)
brilliant twists.
love your 55, as always.
Happy Weekend.
A great twist!
What a disappointment!
he is a dog.
Happy weekend Darling!!
--snow
My Mum always used to say 'they've had words' AJ - great phrase isn't it? LOL
You got it Beach LOL
Either that or it was her birthday Valerie but if that was the case the flowers will be from a girlfriend no doubt! ;)
Thanks Jingle :)
Cheers Belinda :)
Indeed Sharon
You're right on that one Snow. Happy Weekend to you too my lovely. x
well buggers to him! ha ha ha
smiles, bee
xoxoxoxoxoxo
"Those were delivered for her next door" he mumbled."
HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAA! Hilarious ending, m'dear!
Never saw it coming!
Have a wonderful weekend!
X
oh it just went from bad to worse...ha. nice twisty 55
Yeah, buggers to him Bee! LOL
Thanks Ron, I'm happy to make you smile.
Glad you enjoyed it Brian :)
And he didn't think to hide them? What a dolt! Now he'd really better start coming up with some words of apology!
Is this a True Story?
Loved your 55 Pearlie Mae
Thanks for playing, Your 55 nearly made it to normalcy...:P:P
Have a Kick Ass Week-End
He obviously didn't care Linda ;)
No, G not a true story. MWM always comes up trumps, not that we argue much anyways. :)
...and then she picked them up and smashed him on the head with them???
yes! So difficult sometimes...
Aloha from Waikiki
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LOL well that's what I'd have done SD&BS!
Indeed it can be Cloudia ;)
Now he owes her two apologies.
Ha! men ... such silly creatures
Indeed he does SAW LOL
Aren't they just Daryl? ;)
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