"Come Home Jeannie" Colin pleaded to his missing wife, on the television appeal.
"If you know where Jeannie is please ring this number."
She'd been missing for months and he hadn't heard a thing.
"It must be awful for that poor man" said Ben
"I don't know what I'd do if you disappeared."
Jeannie smiled.
30 comments:
I'd call this succint smugness! :)
oooooo dark and twisted.
I love it!
Great one, Ak!
That twisted jeannie. Did she live in a bottle by chance? ROFLMAO!!! Well done my friend. Have a great weekend :)
Ha ha ha. Ben better keep an eye on her!
ahhhh Jeannie isn't missing at all!! she's up to something
good stuff lady :)
awesome 55, i thought he killed her!! they will think that soon!!
awesome 55, i thought he killed her!! they will think that soon!!
Another super twist
this made me scoff! At first I assumed Jeannie has escaped from him, but maybe she is the one hurting him...
Very good.
I think I got it...
Oooo that's wicked.... and brilliant.
OMG...that twist at the end was BRILLIANT!!!!
BRAVA, m'dear!
You never cease to amaze me!
Hope you're having a wondeful time on your trip!
Enjoy your weekend....X
Oh my goodness -- that first man must have been horrid to live with for Jeannie to take such pleasure in his suffering. Either that, or Jeannie is horrid and the first man should be rejoicing that she's gone!
Oh! Wicked story, Akelamalu. I LOVE it!
very impressive 55.
love the idea and the set up!
I LIKE that one!
:-D
Oh that smile!
Aloha from Hawaii, Sis
Comfort Spiral
Hehehehehe I LOVE it. :)
I also love that your health is good and you're feeling so splendid. Enjoy Scottland!!
--snow
Apparently Jeannie isn't missing at all - she knows right where she is!
Brilliant week in and week out LOL
x
Now that's nice and twisty!
akelamalu: wha hahahaha. that's it, it fun and funny and has a tint of naughty. I think Rod sterling could have done a Twightlight Zone episode.
boo!
I like it honey.
later sweets
ha@!
for a lancy lass you're not half bad. all joking aside , I loved this post
I REALLY like this one, Ake!
I thought I got it and then I read the comments and now I'm confused!!
Awesome story!
Me too Jinksy
Jeannie is very dark and very twisted Gillian ;)
Thanks Laney x
I think she just wanted to make her hubby suffer Thom ;)
He should but he doesn't know her well enough SAW!
You got it Dianne - Jeannie is only missing to her husband. ;)
I think that's what Jeannie is hoping Clean&Crazy!
Cheers Daryl :)
Thanks Dumdad :)
Well spotted Menina!
I'm sure you did Buff :)
Jeannie is the wicked one Valerie LOL
I love you Ron, you're so appreciative. x We had a great time hon.
It could be either of those reasons Quilly - you choose.
Glad you enjoyed it Nitebyrd :)
Pleased you liked it Jingle
Thanks Susan :)
Yes indeed, that smile says it all Cloudia!
Oh thankyou Snowelf - on all counts. x
She certainly does Linda!
You're too kind Marmie, thanks chuck. x
I try Trav ;)
I thought you'd like it Spiky x
Happy to make you smile Lettuce :)
Us Lancy lasses aren't just pretty faces you know BobMac! LOL
Glad you liked it Mama Zen :)
It's whatever you read into it Eternally Distracted ;)
Cheers Joy :)
You seriously need to compile these in a book! They are so much fun to read!
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