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Friday, 3 May 2013

Friday 55 Flash Fiction #216 Hiding Place......


"I'll hide them in the plantpots" she thought "they will be safe in there."

She quickly planted the first one, carefully covering it with the soil

Repeating the sequence she secreted a second, third and fourth in different pots.

"Now I just have to remember where I've hidden them when winter arrives" thought the squirrel.


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17 comments:

MorningAJ said...

Oh that's clever! I never saw the squirrel coming!

anthonynorth said...

Nice twist at the end there.

Cloudia said...

Sounds like you observed this in your own flowerpots. :-) you are the master of mysteriously leading us on till the punchline!

Beach Bum said...

Nicely done!

Valerie said...

Brilliant. At first I thought you were hiding keys :O)

Akelamalu said...

Ah my little twist worked then AJ :)

Thanks Anthony x

I have seen the squirrels doing exactly that Cloudia. Thanks honey. x

Cheers Beach x

I was hoping that's what folk would think Valerie :)

Secret Agent Woman said...

I've caught the squirrel digging in my plant pots, so I know this to be true!

izzy said...

Very creative, thanks!

mrsnesbitt said...

So you Pearl lol!

Daryl said...

cleverly done

G-Man said...

You have Squirrels in England?
I know you have LOTS of Nuts!
Welcome back AKE...YAY!!!!!!!
Loved your Burial 55
Thanks for playing, thanks for returning to the fold, and have a Kick Ass Week-End

Ron said...

"Now I just have to remember where I've hidden them when winter arrives" thought the squirrel."

HAHAHAHAHAHAHA! Awesomely clever finish!

And I often wonder HOW they find those nuts after they bury them?!?

Great Flash Fiction!

Have a lovely weekend, m'dear!

X

Akelamalu said...

Yep me too SAW

Thanks Izzy :)

Cheers Denise x

Thankyou Daryl x

Well after the omen how could I not come back G? ;)

I have often wondered that myself Ron, I think they must have a sixth sense don't you?

Other Mary said...

Your unexpected closing made me smile. Thanks!

CrystalChick said...

OH, squirrels know exactly where everything they want and need is. And if it's inside a house, they will go in for it. haha!

Good flash fiction!

Akelamalu said...

I'm happy to make you smile Other Mary :)

You're so right there CrystalChick! Thanks.

Maggie May said...

Ah yes....... otherwise she would tip them all out all over the place whilst looking! Smiles!
Maggie x

Nuts in May