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Monday, 22 October 2012

Succinctly Yours - A Microfiction Meme #64



Grandma at Grandma's Goulash provides a picture and a word prompt for this Microfiction Meme and the rules are use the photo as inspiration for a story of 140 characters OR 140 words.

Want more challenge? Use the word of the week in your story. This part is optional.

This week's word is FORGET here's the picture and my offering, using the picture and word of the week  in 140 characters, including spaces and punctuation.



Goldie,the goldfish,was confused.
With so many others sharing the same tank
it was all too easy to forget in which direction you were headed.

20 comments:

Banker Chick said...

Must be an ageing gold fish, I spend a lot of time trying to remember where I am going and WHY! Good post.

Daryl said...

love it ... a legitimate issue ... ;)

anthonynorth said...

I know the feeling :-)
Nice one.

Gledwood said...

I used to have a giant silver dappled shubunkin (which is a Japanese goldfish except mine wasn't gold) who glided around our tropical community tank all day picking up algae-covered pebbles, sucking on them like boiled sweets for a few secs before spitting them out... he loved doing that...

Ron said...

"it was all too easy to forget in which direction you were headed."

HAHAHHAHAHHAHA! Flawless!

Another wonderful Microfiction, m'dear!

Have a great Monday!

X

Valerie said...

LOL this is great. I think he took a leaf out of my book!

Akelamalu said...

LOL Me too BankerChick!

Glad you enjoyed it Daryl x

Me too Anthony :)

I didn't know that fish did that Gleds :0

So glad you enjoyed it Ron xx

Thanks Valerie x

A Lady's Life said...

Now I wish I had fish again lol Thanks

Cloudia said...

I love your jokey brain!



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Adam said...

I love goldfish

Pat said...

Goldie needs a gps.

Beach Bum said...

Yeah, even now I find myself often wondering where I am going and what I am suppose to be doing.

Great writing!

Lea said...

This made me smile. THe photo goes well with your microfiction :)

cheshire wife said...

Which ever way, it is round in a circle. Isn't it?

Akelamalu said...

Glad to be of help Lady's Life LOL

Thanks Cloudia x

Me too Adam :)

I think you're right Pat!

Me too sometimes Beach LOL

Cheers Lea :)

Yep Cheshire Wife

Secret Agent Woman said...

Doesn't matter, when they get to one side, they just have to turn around and go the other way anyway.

Jim said...

Nice thinking, I agree. However when this picture was taken they all were headed away from the camera. Note that none are headed to the middle, all outward.
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Ruthinian Gregoire said...

I will be confused myself too. nice take on this week's challenge.

Shakira Choong said...

This reminded me of my visit to Hong Kong once. I was walking in a crowd or rather I was in a crowd and it was moving...I was so lost and apparently I fainted. I truly know the feeling...Mine is here
Have you a truly AWESOME WEEK!!!
hugs
shakira

Akelamalu said...

That's true SAW but being a fish Goldie doesn't realise that. ;)

None of them look as though they know where they're going to me Jim!

Thanks Ruthinian :)

That must have been scary for you Shakira! :0