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Monday, 12 March 2012

Succinctly Yours - A Microfiction Meme #44



Grandma at Grandma's Goulash provides a picture and a word prompt for this Microfiction Meme and the rules are use the photo as inspiration for a story of 140 characters OR 140 words.


Want more challenge? Use the word of the week in your story. This part is optional.


This week's word is SERENDIPITY here's the picture and my offering using the picture and word of the week  in 140 characters, including spaces and punctuation.


Rocky Raccoon's first thought when he found the bags left on the driveway was "Serendipity".

Then he discovered there was no food in them.

24 comments:

Cloudia said...

fortune can turn so quickly, he lamented-


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Valerie said...

It's a hard life even for a raccoon.

MorningAJ said...

Poor Rocky!

Akelamalu said...

Oh yes it can Cloudia!

It can be Calerie

Yeah poor Rocky AJ

Shrinky said...

Awww, poor little optimist, hope he finds better pickings around the next corner!

Mama Zen said...

Well, that's not fair!

Sometimes Saintly Nick said...

Excellent! [:-)

Banker Chick said...

Poor raccoon the pickins are slim.

Jim said...

Poor Rocky. He can't eat the work tools can he! Nice take on the prompt picture and word.

I did 'Rocky' today. He was a she. And I found the Beatles on Youtube, come see.
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Daryl Edelstein said...

oh no, poor Rocky ..

Sandi McBride said...

Rocky, believe me there are other bags on other drives which are deserving of your attentionz!!
love it
hugs
Sandi

Ron said...

Aw...poor Rocky!

EXCELLENT one, m'dear!

Clever as usual!

Have a great Monday......X

Akelamalu said...

I'm sure he'll find something Shrinky!

No it's not fair Mama Zen

Cheers Nick

He'll find something else no doubt BankerChick:)

Thanks Jim :)

I know, it's a shame isn't it Daryl!

I'm sure Rocky will find them all Sandi!

Thanks Ron x

anthonynorth said...

Ah, some have all the luck, and some, none. Nice one.

Linda said...

Well heck, that was just downright rude of whoever left the bags there to have not included some snackage for Rocky!

Elaine said...

Poor Rocky. :(

Pat said...

Aww, poor Rocky. But beggars can't be choosers. I suppose Rocky doesn't consider himself a beggar, but rather a connoisseur. At least he didn't shred the garbage bags. There is that.

Beach Bum said...
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Beach Bum said...

My dad had a raccoon for a pet as a kid, he told me it was a testy creatures in best of times. Hate to see how a disappointed one might act.

Great writing!

Lisa Ricard Claro said...

Aw, destined for disappointment. He does look a bit disgusted walking away from the mess!

Jenny Woolf said...

Ha ! good bit of microfiction!

Crystal Jigsaw said...

Lol, he does look a bit pee'd off!!

CJ x

Michelle said...

Micro fiction lovers...and everyone is now marked.
Was it worth decades of massive explosives on all your MINESEA - TED SEA- TESS SEA- RED SEA?
NEWFOUNDLAND is getting totally bombarded with logbooks , videos , records.
If you don't think DODONGO is begging for mercy with half of HOLLYWOOD, you better think it again.
With CRISCRO.

Grandma's Goulash said...

Poor Rocky! A tragic microfiction. lol