Monday, 5 March 2012

Succinctly Yours - A Microfiction Meme #43

Grandma at Grandma's Goulash provides a picture and a word prompt for this Microfiction Meme and the rules are use the photo as inspiration for a story of 140 characters OR 140 words.

Want more challenge? Use the word of the week in your story. This part is optional.

This week's word is SATURATE here's the picture and my offering using the picture and word of the week  in 140 characters, including spaces and punctuation.

Jim & Jean loved sitting on the bench by the lake.

The punk who saturated them for a laugh

 was shocked to learn Jim was a karate expert.


Beach Bum said...

Life is full of little surprises just like that. Great writing!

MorningAJ said...

That'll teach him!
Nice one.

Valerie said...

Serves him right.

Another little gem for me to enjoy. Thanks.

Akelamalu said...

Isn't it just Beach? Thanks.x

It will indeed AJ

Yes it does Valerie. Glad you enjoyed it.

Empress Bee (of the high sea) said...

oh you go jim!

smiles, bee

Flowerpot said...

Great - and what a lovely picture!

anthonynorth said...

A pleasant surprise for him. Nice one.

Jim said...

Hi Hank ~~ Great!
Remember Leroy Brown, badder than a junk yard dog?
That certainly fits your Jim.

Daryl Edelstein said...

What did he saturate them with? was it a sodden karate chop Jim inflicted on the punk?

Ron said...

" was shocked to learn Jim was a karate expert."


Great one, m'dear. As usual!

Have a wonderful Monday.....X

Linda said...

Way to go, Jean! Hi-ya!

Suburbia said...

That was unexpected! Made me laugh!

Akelamalu said...

Yeah let's cheer Jim on Bee!

Thanks Flowerpot x

One he richly deserves Anthony LOL

Thanks Jim

Presumably water from the lake Daryl. :)

Cheers Ron x

Jim delivered the chop Linda not Jean. LOL

Happy to make you smile Suburbia

Mama Zen said...

Serves the little punk right!

Lisa Ricard Claro said...

My kind of story. I bet the punk go everything he deserved. It sounds like his retribution came swiftly!

Jenny Woolf said...

Clever! I had to laugh at the thought of it!

Dave said...

What a wonderful story you go JIM !!!

A Lady's Life said...

hai ya!! Karate used to be my life lol

Dianne said...

that's how you handle a punk!

I love their hair

Grandma's Goulash said...

A fun story with a fine twist. Thanks for the smile.

Pat said...

That punk is not going to be messing with senior citizens for awhile. Good one...and kudos for the use of the wotw!

Cloudia said...

Good for JIM!
(More like you if it should have been Harriet who 'schooled' him :-)

Aloha from Honolulu
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Akelamalu said...

I think so too Mama Zen

Yeah he certainly deserved what he got Lisa!

Thanks Jenny, glad it made you smile.

Cheers Dave

You'd know how to deal with punks too then Lady's Life LOL

I think Jim used to have a pony tail Dianne ;)

Thanks Grandma

He'll certainly think twice in future methinks Pat LOL

Yes she would have but Jim got to him first Cloudia ;)

Gledwood said...

ho ho ho!

Anonymous said...

Lol, good ol' Jim!!

CJ x

Kay L. Davies said...

Good for Jim! Punks deserve to be dealt with.

Travis Cody said...

Don't be messin' with the old folks!

Akelamalu said...

Ah I made you smile Gleds :)

Yep good old Jim CJ!

They do indeed Kay!

Old folks have many secrets Trav, it's never wise to mess with them. ;)

Misty Dawn said...

That'll teach him!